ok I guess
It's waay better then previous episodes. Graphics are smoother, too. Lips synch has been soooo improved, but your choices in action-music has gone even worse.
Uhm, I don't want to write the review, as if the series should be made for MY music tastes, but I think that Starcraft is more of a horror-thriller-moody kind of genre, not an action flick. Don't get me wrong, there 'should' be just the amount of action, as you put in this flash, only not with music you put there.
And to backup my word with some hard evidence.
You saw the movie Pitch black with Vin Diesel? Near the end, there is a fight between Riddick and that cop. VERY climatic, dark mood, not fast music-based fight. At least not techno-thing. It's fantastic.
What you could try, is put the original game music in your submition. The zerg melody (the rock one) should be more then suitable for the fight one on one. If not, try to get some movie score CD's. There's a world of non-lyrics music for you to find.
I don't want to end my words with criticism, because the first place in newgrounds is FULLY deserved for you. Don't mind my critics, because I very much like what you are doing. It's least what I can say, that you are doing best stracraft-based movies in this portal. Keep it up, dude.