Reviews for LL - Start of A Movement

[Frenzy]

Not Bad

--The Good--

I loved the pre-loader, first of all. The graphics in tihs movie were pretty good, and the style was, too. The sound wasn't bad in tihs flash, either. This flash was pretty funny, as well.

--The Improvement-Needing--

Well, this flash started out alright, but then it just started getting kind of sloppy. The subtitles cut out after some of the movie had passed. It started making no sense at all, too.

--Overall--

Overall, I gave you a 6. This isn't a bad flash, but it's just kind of slovenly-made. Good job, but try harder next time.

Control-Lock responds:

Thx for the review

[GrimSilverFire]

Not bad

For a first flash submission it's good A bit on the short side but still good.When I heard the Fresh Prince song it made me smile so you get an extra piont for that.What I like about this flash the most is that you're voice is easyer to understand than all the other Locks.I did notest is that you said you done this in one day(before you edited it), thats amazing considering that lots of the flashes that get blamed when the auther took weeks or months to make it. Overall quite a good flash. I'll be looking forword to your other works.

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Control-Lock responds:

"For a first flash submission it's good A bit on the short side"

Yeah I have 5 sec flash attention span. I can't seem to waste more than 1 day on a flash.

[FattyWhale]

lol...

^^Good Points^^
The whole "awareness flash" thing you had going on was pretty funny. Throughout this short movie there was a good amount of humor. The drawings weren't terrible either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This should be longer, or atleast hurry up with releasing the next episode. I would really like to see what happens next!

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[Zero-X]

short

It was to short to start anything but what you put in the text. It looked nice but there wasn't much there. For some reason at the end control lock was clickable but when you click him nothing happens.

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[Imacow]

not bad...

pretty good, the graphics were pretty damn good, the style was pretty random so i gavce you a 4(but the rpince of belair song was pretty funny, the sound wasn't bad, no violence, not much interactivity, the randomness made it pretty funny so 5 for that, overall good but could use more of a story and could be longer, 3/5