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Well ill give it the fact that i found it intensely funny at the moment he turned off the fresh prince, but it was short and you seemed to rush it alot at the end although that was kinda the joke. I liked your character designs and you backgrounds designs showed good attempt. The sound was well done and seemed to synch together well. Overall although it was short you were able to fit all you needed to into it.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
lol...
^^Good Points^^
The whole "awareness flash" thing you had going on was pretty funny. Throughout this short movie there was a good amount of humor. The drawings weren't terrible either.
^^Needs Improving^^
This should be longer, or atleast hurry up with releasing the next episode. I would really like to see what happens next!
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not bad...
pretty good, the graphics were pretty damn good, the style was pretty random so i gavce you a 4(but the rpince of belair song was pretty funny, the sound wasn't bad, no violence, not much interactivity, the randomness made it pretty funny so 5 for that, overall good but could use more of a story and could be longer, 3/5
Not a horrible lock day flash
~The good~
Graphics weren't too bad, especially for your lock flash. You animated the backgrounds and the rest of the flash, no fake backgrounds. The voiceovers were traditional clock voices, so it's acceptable. The randomness of the Prince of belair theme song also made me laugh and was in good quality, so that's a plus. Also, the added subtitles made watching this flash easier.
~The bad~
It was a little too short, and was plotless. One problem I had was why PotatoLock was complaining when Controllock was getting a drink, not food, so the reason he got mad was pretty stupid... Maybe he's going through his period >:)
Overall, a decent Lock Day flash that's well done for your first one, but still could've been longer. I hope this review was helpful!
3/5
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(Technically 1,000th flash because one of my other reviews got deleted :\ )
Thx for review and congrats on 1,000 reviews!
Not bad
For a first flash submission it's good A bit on the short side but still good.When I heard the Fresh Prince song it made me smile so you get an extra piont for that.What I like about this flash the most is that you're voice is easyer to understand than all the other Locks.I did notest is that you said you done this in one day(before you edited it), thats amazing considering that lots of the flashes that get blamed when the auther took weeks or months to make it. Overall quite a good flash. I'll be looking forword to your other works.
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"For a first flash submission it's good A bit on the short side"
Yeah I have 5 sec flash attention span. I can't seem to waste more than 1 day on a flash.