Really good!
This flash is pretty tight. I dont know where the voice cam from but everything in that flash is something everyone should take heed to for its good advice.
Reviews for "The Sunscreen Song"
Ying-yong responds:
That song really is touching...
(( VERY GOOD ))
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i kinda liked it, it actually was very good in giving a sorta info base about it whichw as neat and something you dont see all the time, anyways nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would leave it as is.
~~OVERALL~~
Not what is expected but still good stuff..
~X~
Well, it wasn't bad.
I gotta pretty much agree with what the person before me said, but I think it was better than they gave it credit for. All that must have taken a whole lot of time, and it was obvious that i started getting better later on.
But I'm really not sure what that was he pulled out at the beginnnig though :P I'll take thir word for it that it was a gituar.
Ying-yong responds:
XD Well, that thing was a guitar, it made the drrriiiinng sound, trust me. Glad you liked it.
YAY! my initials are in the movie!!!
AD.V on the box! LOLs0rz! well, I applaud the sunscreen (I guess), N that part when the angry face fell down was hillarious!
Ying-yong responds:
Thanks man!
Like the song...
Here's what this Flash has going for it: a good song and amusing imagery (such as the inclusion of Foamy and that evil frowny face). However, its weak suit is the scrawliness of the drawings. The lines could do with a global smoothing. Fades are done wrong, so each layer fades out separately. I dislike the mixture of stick men, raster images, and filled figures. The worst visual moment in the Flash is "the race is long" part where the track ascends above the horizon. Overall, a good accompaniment to The Sunscreen Song, with the exception of the awful lipsynching misalignment on "respect your elders."
Ying-yong responds:
Thank you for the helpful review.
I can explain some of the bad drawings....the race is long part was done with finger mouse, and others with just a mouse. That's why some better artists are on front page, they're Wacom-Bound. The lip-syncing misalignment was inevitable because I had to up the sound quality, and the lip synching was skewered.
As for stickmen, google'd images, and filled figures, they were all tests. If you read the author comments, it says why I used them. Not that I like stickmen, but I wanted to see if it worked.
Thanks again for your review. Expect more from me.