wow
that was extremly good not much to improve on except i found at times you spoke it like an old englesh tale and at other times liek a modern american tale the alteration in ur words that u chose took away from the whole tale it would be better off if u had done the whole script like an old englesh stype tounge it would have givin it alot of authenticity but other than that it god damn amazing and i love how u made it like the tale was orignaly told cuas all fairytales that we are told never had a happy ending that is just the god damn fukin censorization of our nation really well done love the effort u put into hope to see another one soon like the boy who cried wolf or three litle pigs