Great take
Yeah, it was negative and all, but - in the real world, nothing is a fairy tale, I guess. Can't put a price on realism. Shocking, and even though we've all heard the tale, you managed to sustain a really solid level of suspense.
Very well written - almost film-noir type tragedy. I love the characters that were developed to replace old ones too. Very innovative. Didn't fully understand the iron corset (in a metaphorical sense, it was cool, though). Other than that... a very well written piece of work. Thanks.