Excellent
Nice with the twist...it was about time that the story went the wolf's way...without going back to going the hunter's way at the end. the additional twist at the beginning was interesting..the corset was interesting as well, never heard or read it in the story before...
It was Ok
It was great but your voice was *ERRR* try adding your friendsl ike for little red riding hood liek a 17 year old girl or cousin, then you as wolf, just add other people. And you took breaths in it so i was like ?????
Nice either way
darkness befalls a fairy tail
great job with the story twists. really smooth flashwork.
Exhilarating
That was so dark... and so awesome. I suspected that it would end in the wolf's favor but I did not expect that he'd be the one telling the story.
I absolutely love classic fairy tales made dark and grimacing.
10/10 5/5.
Cool
a little off, as far as story, but good still