Incredible artwork, but needs adjustments...
What was wrong with the background, at six places, the background's dimensions did not fit with the screen and at alot of other scenes, backgrounds seemed to be missing.
It makes me think that you submitted this before it was really done, I would appreciate some more work on this movie when it comes to some of the backgrounds, even though you sometimes used black backgrounds for a higher effect, or white backgrounds, it did not really have a positive effect.
There is also a scene in the beginning where the stones in the background has it's layer over Bitey's face, which results in that background objects are infront of foreground objects, aswell as in the same scene, those stones flies into the air when Bitey's face is zoomed.
The FPS speed was sometimes too high too, but not very often.
However, the rest of the graphical effects are great. really worth to mention.
But the last scene with the shaded beings, there is a blue line so the characters' bodies does not enter into the bottom of the screen. It would look better if they did.
The background in that scene is somehow sterile and would work better with the stars visible there too by the way.
The sound effects are as always awesome and there are nothing to be improved there.
Overall, this is a great story and an incredible artwork, but some of it could need to be fixed.
Thank you very much for submitting on Newgrounds!
/Mathias Andersson