amazing story
I love these stories cause of the uniqeness of the creatures. I love how you dont just stick with one main creature and create a story out of it. Instead you make all the creatures some how as little as it may be interact with each other.
My favorite was the prowlies. the way you made them so playful and then defensive was good, almost gave a characteristic to a creature that actually doesnt exist.
great job, please though if you are gunna make these shadowed creatures with the glowing eyes into some kind of orc or goblin please dont completely draw it from lord of the rings. You may never have thought of this but I love the originality of all the creatures you think of, I would hate to see one that has such a wide range of diversity ruined because a popular film.
All in all it was a great story keep going ill keep watching!!