Cool!
Very nice...reminds me of Kaput and Zosky from nicktoons...heh..
Reviews for "Jot + Jab Episode 1"
GREAT!..
I happened to love this very much. Its getting added to favorites for sure. Good job and I'm anticipating the second one.
Jokes were quite immature....but good animation.
I'm sorry but it seems a bit like you think you're funny, but your jokes are rather immature and weak. Maybe it's meant to be like that? I don't know. I hope that in future episodes you can mature the jokes a bit more and move on from the "it's funny to a guy who has nothing better to do than dream about women". Dirty jokes are fine, but it gave me the above feeling more than the dirtyness.
Anyways, I do not want you to think I am insulting you. I liked it a lot and I think you have a really great animating style. I loved your sound and I thought the whole storyline ran very smoothly. Like somebody else said in a review, it was like watching Futurama. I believe that's because it had that same feeling of a well developed story that unfolded within a short amount of time. Good job on that!
I also liked how the story was partly interactive. Although I don't think the overall plot of them going to the contest would have changed had I not chosen for Jab to go to the contest, it was fun all the same, and kept the viewer attached to the story. In fact, I wish you could add more of those in to the next one. I assume you are doing another episode since it's a series? Well I look forward to it! Great job overall, just maybe get somebody else to do the jokes? Or change the style of the jokes if you believe you can be maturely funny. Keep it up mate.
Yeah, it's good.
I just wanted to say I saw this at Camp Choas a long while ago, and on my DVD of course :P but I just wanted to say it's good to see more of your work on NG.
PS RPS 13 is freakin' outragious!
childish
the jokes were a bit childish even with the the adult humor. but it did some what make me feel like i was watching futurama for a while.