Great!
Yeah dude!
That was good kept me entertained, love the "choose your own adventure" style clicky bits and the "move your ass" joke...altogether a great piece of work ! well done!! Will be looking forward to the next episode :D
Reviews for "Jot + Jab Episode 1"
Dude ...
Very very cool ...
Yes I can see the Ren & Stimpy influence.
The last guy said it was too long. That cracks me up, as most people bitch about flash toons being too short. I was really impressed you made it about as long as a real T.V. toon.
Nice work ...
'the pp'
Too long
It was too long. Flash has to be in your face and action packed.
But well drawn and animated.
And I loved the floating 'space table'.
I liked this.
I've seen the entire Retarded Animal Babies series, and I see many references here. The part where Jot and Jab are kicked into the trash resembles that part of RAB 12. The art style is also very similar (Though I don't remember that many humans in RAB. Probably just women and that's it.) This was a funny derivative without all the offensive stuff, so this flash was cool.
If anything...
This is a good watermark to show the evolution of your flash skills. You've improved greatly, btw. Not your best work, but eh. Long elevator shot worked well.
BTW... thought you weren't making anymore RAB toons due to low store sales.