Yay! I was waiting for another submission from you
Does the emo never end, AITD?
Reviews for "Autumn Tree"
Good but not original
First of all. This is way too similiar to the film Elephant.
You totally ripped off the scene where they tell the friend outside to go away, aswell as the teacher scene where he says "bitch". You also took the soundtrack too, with the piano tracks. You did however choose good music (<3 Godspeed you black emperor). All that negativity aside, the graphics although far from perfect were fairly detailed and most of the animation was well done. I like how you kept the original Columbine quote of "do you believe in God?" but you should have shown them commiting suicide at the end for people who were too lazy to read the letter and dont know the actual Columbine story. The music was good, the voice acting was a little... cheesy. It would of been cooler, if you kept the whole thing silent until the end when they ask if they believe in God, you'd have to lose the bit where they let their friends get away, but that never happened in Columbine.
Anyway, good work, the effort put into this is clearly visible, just try not to take too many ideas from existing media.
grading
i always grade averything individualy so in other word i like your drawing in flash and there is alot of violence but that dosent make it a good movie i hate it when poeple make movies about the sad thing in life try making it a little nore inspiring not a sad movie, my favorate is comedy so everyone!!! stop with the sadness!!! do comedy plz!!! anyway i hated it....
IT WAS NOT DEEP
It was less than mediocre for the fact they had all these stupid one liners, when these artists have no idea what actually happened they seemed to have stupified the true story of what happened. DOnT GIVE ME THAT CRAP THAT IT WAS DEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It would have been better if there werent those stupid one liners including that one about God, thats what made it corny and the map that said "Jocks" on it. WTF IS THAT ABOUT?!?!? The artwork was beautiful you had a pretty good theme its just you simplified what happened and stereotyped everyone
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Learn more about columbine before you make an animation to it. The shootings at columbine were in the name of god in the eyes of the shooters.