its good, its correct
I remember watching this a while back, roughly around the time this got a newgrounds award i saw it on UGO
What reminded me of this was when teh Sister of Rachel Scott ( Was it scott, blasted memory. Anyways Rachel Scott was one of the first people to be killed ) she went on to describe all the events, preluding, about her sister, tapes of the incident etc. A real heatbreak to show to us.
Moving along, i decided to check this out again and well this is what i thought
you got a good deal correct. Yes, that the blonde haired kid ( I dont wanna use names becuase i cant remember the names) helped out the purple haired kid ( lets call him purple :P ) after a fight, and they quickly became friends since people thought of em as different
ANyways to the scene of the map and Final Judgement. The map woulda been a bit more realistic if you decided to make it outline the Library and the Cafeteria. The Plan was that they would set bombs in the area, then move to the Library and attempt their killing spree there. The arrow of entry i believe was to the cafeteria, which was right since they killed rachel on their way to the cafeteria. The Dave conversation i dont know happened, but as for dave himself, he was alive, and real. When the Teacher was killed in the hallway, that never happened. The only teacher to be killed was in the Library with most of the others
The cafeteria scene was right, the god conversation was real
and the andy conversation was correct.
You did well, i'd say a few things were wrong but doesnt really matter, the teacher part made things more dramatic so i see why it was there.