Tragic story, disclosed exceptionally
Not without flaws though. The guns used by both guys were Tec-9's, and your illustrations resembled assault rifles. Also, the disjointed nature of the graphics lacked a realistic ambiance; it looked more like something out of a modern art sketch book rather than a real event. Oh yeah, and a small digression to guide future reviews: Don't give this a lower rating because of the somber nature of the content. Such degredation demonstrates not only a lack of maturity but an inability to cognize authorial intent in a reviewer.