Scary
You know what I notice in things like these? Something that drags it down. Ever read Robert Corimers book "After the First Death" 4 gunmen take control of a bus full of preschool kids, and kill 2 and the driver. You learn about them, and you feel like siding with them. You avoided this. For that simple reason, 10.
Great work
Myself being from Colorado, this flash hitsvery close to home. Thank you for being balanced in this not only did you show that these kids were suffering you did it without making the shooters as heros. Very good job.
"Sigh"
I have to say this is one of those flashes that confuses me in a good, in the sence of not being abel to know wether to fell, sympathy, pity, anger, sarrow, or relation. and that is a sign of a great cinnamatic pice and make's it so much more real and alive 10/10.
So Real.
I think this completely shows the thoughts and feelings of the two boys.Great idea to do this.
pretty deep
that was one of the greatest flashes ever. wow.....scary stuff