i really enjoyed this
i have to say it touches my heart when i watch these, you can tell real emotion went into the making of it... i really want to know what the suprise is that jai has for sha!
Reviews for "Stop Crying - Part 2"
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I love both Stop Cryings. I don't know what is sadder, The fact that your brother died when you were young or that you hated your house so much that you were willing to get up at 4:30 just to get out of it. I know that you most likely don't want sympathy, so I won'start breaking into "I'm so sorries".I just can't believe how much shit people have to endure. It must have half killed you to make these chapters.Both of your flashes are my all time favorites. Peace out
-C K
i understand its for your dead brother and all...
and i feel sorry for your loss, but unfortunately, there isnt a "Sympathy" category to rate you in, so im just gonna review the flash based on what it is, not what its about...
first off, the graphics are somewhat well drawn. this could be improved, though. your animation, unfortunately, is horrible. when Jai (is that his name?) walks away from the stand, he just gets tweened. theres no walking animation for it. the newstands are 2d, and that just looks retarded. a 3d illusion would have made it a lot better. but thats not the only bad part. all of the walking cycles are poorly made, too. the voice-acting was mediocre, at best. the actors have no real emotion...i mean, a man threatens to kill her, and someone just says "hey, who is there?", and then, "a man grabbed her. i think she is scared." the dialogue is mostly just plain corny.
also, there is no way a 12-year-old girl is stronger than a (grown?) man. he would have yanked her away from that pipe easily.
so, bottom line...everyone (or mostly everyone) feels sorry for your loss, but this is just a rather poorly made flash.
card game
The card game that was played in this flash requires more than one deck. Thus, there were five aces.
that was good
That was pretty good i like Part 1 also.