Reviews for Stop Crying - Part 2

[Night-Sea]

Feelings, its nice to see them

i just want to know if this story really happened to u or its just your imagination either way i liked it very much. I think the graphics where ok, the color were nice, the thing i cared most is that with little animation u can show many things.... just one thing i have to say ur expression of feelings in the voices were wonderful, but i couldnt feel them in the characters thats my only advise. And one more thing keep up the good work and im looking forward to the next chapter..........;) Night_Sea M7

[Chris-Aldin]

Great work!

This was great, i really loved this as a final product. Episode one was great as well, a cool thing is how both parts have almost completely different styles. In my review i will briefly explain each aspect of this flash.

The graphics were good, they did the job but i wasnt totally amazed. The drawings were pretty good, but sometimes they lacked a little detail. The animation was good at some points but in general, it was a little off, it seemed a little werid watching it. But i enjoyed the backrounds, character design and effort you put into everything. Your style was great, mostly because of your awesome story. Its cool to see a flash, dedicated to a loved one, or maybe this story was based on real life experiences. Either way i really liked it, it could have been presented in a slightly more energetic way however. The feel was good, it seemed peaceful with that music playing quietly in the backround. The sound was also good in this movie, but i would have loved to see more sound effects. The voice acting seemed pretty good, just the right amount of expression and characterization. The audio quality was nice too.

Overall very good job. Im still sorry about your brother and i hope you and your family are doing well. I know how it feels to lose some one you care about. Anwyays keep up the great work in the next episode. 4/5

[symnciddy]

I've watched both 1 and 2

and well to be honest other than the sympathy stuff I don't see what's so great about either one. You wanted to make a tribute to your brother right? That's fine, in fact I think that's a GREAT thing to do but what's with all the self pity bullshit?

In both flashes, your brother is only on screen for about 1/4 of the film and the rest is about how sad you are and how you've been abused by people. The animation is horrible and the voice acting sounds monotonous. In fact the entire thing was just boring. I guess I would feel sorry for you if it wern't for the fact that, well that type shit happens all the time in real life. The way you portrayed it however seems very unrealistic though. I've seen much worse things in real life and I'm sure as hell that people just don't say things like "hey! who is there?" when they get grabbed by someone. A user said that the dialogue is corny and I couldn't agree more.

Anyway, what I'm trying to say is what are you trying to accomplish? It would be nice if you just made a flash showing how much of a good person your brother was and paying tribute to him and then that's it. But, you seem to be more concerned about having people be sorry about you and that's not the correct way to pay tribute to your brother. I am starting to wonder if anything you say is even true because a lot of it seems very far-fetched (especially some of the scenes in the first flash). If your brother really is dead, please make a proper flash about him and stop making those damn self pity scenes. I'm sure that if he were alive today he wouldn't want you to reflect and feel sad about or have people feel sorry about such minute things such as some time when some guy grabbed you and ran away. You can't live live reflecting on the past and feeling sad. Make a tribute to your brother then move on, and keep living on for the future without looking back.

[a7ex-2388]

Great

This may not be the best drawn or best animated flash on newgrounds, but none of that should matter when you've got a story a beautiful as yours

[mrEotter]

im just being realistic

i do feel sympathy for ur loss but on the flash basis its just a bit mediocre on the movement and the voices i couldnt hear until i turned my volume up half-way. however this is still good and better than alot of flshes ive seen.