Lacks sound
I dont care about the voice acting or the graphics because I think its decent, also the story is ok. Its really good that you made a movie for your brother. I would just like to say it needs more sounds, alot more sounds, it only has voices and music would do great with it.
My outlook on the whole thing.
I don't think it matters if this made up or not. It was a wonderful piece of animation and that's all that matters, but if you're asking me my opinion, I'd have to say it's true and here's why. A great athlete must work very hard to get good at a sport, a comedian has has seen a decent amount of bad luck in his life and the greatest poet have suffered greatly. (Edger Allen Poe) I believe that nothing is truely bad or good and all things have both a positive and a negitive side. (though there not allways equal) I think this supports my theory. Thanks so much for the movie.
P.S. Holy_Light1 change your name.
good...also sry
sry bout ur bro...but some of these ppl are right the voices arnt 2 great...but heh the storys...ok i guess...if its a true story...well its kool u did somethn for ur bro...but it need some bettr acting and a little bettr animation...but still pretty good
Great story,
could've used a vampire though.
Like a police report...
...its hard to recall things you don't want to. Writers usually hide behind words when recollecting hard events (I'm not saying they're cowards. I'm a writer myself and I know how hard it is just to put something personal on paper). You go beyond paper and put a face on yourself and your story, something people usually can't do when dealing with this kind of subject. You might be the first, and unfortunately, maybe last of your kind of flash animator. I'll keep looking for signs of the next chapter.