Wow
That's really sad.
How she tries to die, but she can't
And I loved the part when she's falling
You should make more
Reviews for "Do Us Part"
what?
To the last reviewer, it was spose to make u think or dont u do that? Great flash man keep it up. Well actually dont it seems a little depressing to do all the time. Ha
ShockTsunami responds:
Thanks for the nice words! Yeah, I'm not a super depressed kind of guy or anything, I just wanted to tell a compelling story.
Meh.
I personally don't care much for this. It was a little dull.
Good title, but you should've made it 'Death do us part' instead.
When she tried slitting her wrists, it just made me think that she had bad razorblades, not that her hudband was protecting her.
What happened, exactly, with the jumping off the building? Did she get friggin' teleported into her bed by her spouse, or was she dreaming?
I understand her husband's protecting her through death, but it's a little far-fetched to believe a spirit can save your body from falling at 50-60 miles per hour.
But other than those potholes, yeah, the graphics were pretty good and the sound was awesome.
Keep but up, but make sure it makes a little more sense next time.
ShockTsunami responds:
Yeah, I mean, what are the chances that that could happen? And ghosts don't exist at all. Wow, you really opened my eyes, because this Flash is a total lie. I guess I'll just write off fiction as completely "far-fetched" as well. Only the absolute truth from me, from now on.
Make some Flash before you trash the Flash.
Amazing
This has to be the most amazing thing to cross Newgrounds in a long time. Of course, the comments made by a twelve year old clock fan really shouldn't bother you. Not that clock's a bad crew or anything, but it seems that the person is only here for the cheap trills and bells of your run of the mill flash, not something you are about, with this piece anyway, at all. Good work, keep it up.
Touching
I don't see how people can say that you shouldn't make sad flashes. Sure the world has alot of saddness, but you don't have to be an asshole about it. Anyway, that was a really good flash. Keep up the good work!