this was really good
the last review said he didnt like the suicide theme and that you flash needed metaphor... i think hes missed the point totally, this flash is about a love that is lost but the sanctity of their vows protects them no matter what.
its not depressing its life affirming
Thanks for the kind words, and I think you're dead-on right about that.
Great animation
This flash had some awesome animation. You're a really talented animator.
I have only one gripe. What's with all of the depressing flashes about suicide on Newgrounds? It's not original or interesting, all it does is make people annoyed that you can't think of anything better to do. Guys, if you're going to make a depressing flash, try adding some symbolism or metaphor, not just shots of people contemplating how to do themselves in.
Heartfelt, coulda added 15-20 seconds
A bit short, but very well done.
a one-line summary of my review
How great, you are a master.
I loved the way that you switched to a blank screen at certain parts and the animation is instead taken in through sound.
I watched her put that razor to her wrist and I cringed and I narrowed my eyes.
The part where you could only hear her footsteps kept me confused and interested. I didn't know if she was going to the kitchen to get a glass of water or if some robber had broken in throught the front door.
Love is a pretty powerful emotion; I think you captured it perfectly. I'll watch out for some new stuff.
Not bad.
Looks promising...