It's alright...
I do have a few complaints... Why does Ken seem to start off with a really fake-sounding hispanic accent? I thought he sounded ridiculous until it got to the end, where the "accent" seemed to stop existing. Still, it will be interesting to see how this turns out. Just work on that voice. And why is that girl's panties showing the whole time her lower half is on screen? I'd hope a knight of any kind would be wearing more than a shirt and panties with this weird towel-skirt thing. Also, could you have picked less-cliche reason to be a cop that didn't remind me of every cop movie I've seen?