Animation was great...
The rest was lacking though. The story was kinda cliche'd.
Animation was great...
The rest was lacking though. The story was kinda cliche'd.
Not bad..
I like your drawing style.
I also like the backgrounds and little 3D-things that you do.
The problem is: The two do not really fit together, characters and background. Your animation ist great, but that's the one thing that kinda bothered my while watching this flash. There's a slight disharmony in all the graphics.
That's what lowers the rating. That, and the average voice acting.
You got a huge amount of talent though. Keep it up.
good character animation, spotty artwork and sound
the character animation, especially in the intro sequence, was extremely well done. it's easy to tell you paid careful attention to detail with it...but the rest of the flash suffers from an obvious lack of attention. the backgrounds, especially with the textures in the intro, were pretty atrocious. the camera work was annoying, and the speaking was hard to hear over the "soft" background music. also, why did the main character have an accent when his father didn't? also, the sudden change of mood from the driving to being greeted at work to getting yelled at to remembering his father was a bit awkward.
you have a great deal of talent, but this flash feels very unmastered. a simple turning up of the sound for the voice (or turning down of the music), and more attention to background detail would really bring this to life.
Great= intro bad= The Rest of the flash.
The intro was freaken amazing but the thing about the dude was pretty boring. You should make a sequel for that fighting was 10/10 material and just stick to the girl fighting with LOKI and maybe some minions or something.
i know a way to make this better!
at the main begining replace the evil old guy with a chick and make them cool whip wrestle!