Good
Interesting, I thought there could have been more character development overall, but you still did a nice job. The cross as a weapon is a nice touch, as is the necklace, because both could be used for any type of power or to save any person. Keep the enimies dark (it works well), and i reccomend having girl to help the main character (romance is lacking) but still good man :)
5/5
10/10