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You are one of favorite authors. You know why? Because your work does nothing but improve. It's really cool to watch some of your old work and then watch stuff like Red riding hood. It's amazing how much you've improved and how it just keeps getting better! Keep going at this rate and you will blow everyone else right out of the water! The one and only problem I've ever had with your work, is the swords. They always seem to be a little too thin or short especially in this one. Why not give one of your characters a huge sword? Eh, just a thought... As long as it doesn't look like a grey stick. That's all. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to seeing future submissions from you!