this isn't bathroom animation its flash animation.
i think you should go with a more comical or actiony approach.
Reviews for "A Men's Room Monologue"
uh...........ok
that wasn't all that funny but yet so true.
Narrator
I don't really like the way the narrator is telling how the restroom is. The script would be really funny if the way it was spoken was more over-dramatic. The illustrations are good though, and it did make me laugh, because most all of that is true.
what?
I think I laughed once
more sad and true than funny
not worth watching