5er
You get a 5 just because it was SO true.
Reviews for "A Men's Room Monologue"
It COULD have been funny...
The material is pretty good, and everything you said defintly was good humor, but I did not laugh. Why? There is about ZERO emotion in your voice when you're presenting the jokes. Not only that, but because its so monotone, It takes me a split second to realize you just delivered a punch-line. It was stale in a sense.
You have to lead up to the joke, and then put some emphasis on key words and what not. Just do that, and you'll magnify the effect at least 100% more. Maybe I'd even laugh.
For instance, watch a Comedy Central Presents or listen to a stand-up comedian, and listen how they present their jokes. At least you know its not a robot talking.
Wow
All i have to say is LMAO. Super funny
Excellent
Ah, mucho funny.
Great work, laughed like crazy!
This is great, shares some rather universal experiences for stalls at least. Definitely have rethought the old assumption that men have it easier than women in public restrooms.
Would have preferred a few more different voices and more SFX, but it being mostly a 'monologue', it didn't need too much else to improve it. Again, great job!