nice effort...
I know you spent so much time on this, but it would have been so much better if you had someone look over it, maybe. The 10 or so errors on each page distracted me from the tutorial, and I'm sure the XD and :P confused some people, as well as some text being cut off. Also, every next button didn't work properly. This would be an excellent tutorial if you fixed those little things. Also, you left out some very important things, like onion-skinning in FBF