It wasn't bad, but you could do better.
Not bad, but i still think a few things could have been made better.
The info was good, but it kinda got boring. Your SOUND! GOD I HATED THAT ANNOYING MUSIC PLAYING! And also there were no extra sound effects. That kinda pissed me off. But overall, the tutorial was good, it was explicit and described all a new flash maker would want to know.
there were 4 songs and an option to turn the music of.. AND ITS A TUTORIAL, SO WHY SHOULD THERE BE SOUND EFFECTS!!?!?!
ok but...
i gave it a 6 because your download fucked up my flash!! ;(
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I'm going to give you a few tips on things I've learned in the 7 years I've been designing and I don't mean any offense in any of them;
·Proper punctuation - Easier reading material
·Proper spelling - Same as above
·Color balance - Try to avoid more than 4 (main) colors, use differen't shades of the main colors to make it more eye-appealing rather than the over-ruling fluorescent colors you're using now. It gets very sore on the eyes after a while.
·Know what you're talking about. That "Manga" thing you referred to was actually something called Anime, completelyt different style(You can tell the difference by the size of the eyes etc.)
·Avoid auto-playing music, not everyone shares the same taste in music as you do
·Don't call yourselves a designer when you're just getting your feet wet, lets say 5 years from now you're still photoshopping/flashing and someone comes up to you with some of your (then) old work. Nobody would want to be your client if they didn't know what they could expect of you.
I'm going to give you a 5 and vote 4 because I can see you've put effort into it, to me that's worth more than the outcome of the actual item.
Cheers
Thanks for the nice and informative review.
I learned about newgrounds
I learned about newgrounds but still can't make flash movies.
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The loading at thestrart ends at 90.. eh?