Great visuals, but lacking story.
The graphics and animation were of great quality, but the story was given to us in text. I wanted to see a reason why they are fighting, instead of reading it. I think it needed more human faces, or someone actually trying to care at what they were dying for. If you made a short scene of a few pilots talking about what their goal was and what was at risk, it might improve the story of this cartoon. The graphics kept me watching though, but special effects don't make stories great.