A++ Friend
Wow, this is your first flash? Pray tell, is this your actual first flash that you've ever uploaded on the web or have you uploaded other movies under a different name? This looks like a flash done by a seasoned vet. So now its time for some critiquing:
Graphics very well done.
Animation very well done.
Music is aptly chosen (I love the theme music of the two ton terror).
Dialogue was nice and un-cheesy.
The only thing I can suggest is that you get some better audio recording equipment or programs. The audio quality was not up to part with the graphics. However the actual content of the sounds was very nice, just needs to be better quality (i'm only saying this cuz the rest of the flash was so high quality).
And hell yes, you do not speak of my mother! *SMACK*
Hope to see flashes from you in the future friend.