...wow
I have never seen a flash done with that kind of animation before...it looks like it was pulled stright from a cartoon! I absolutely loved your style and even more so, your animation. Quite simple the best looking flash I have ever seen!
So why did it get a 9? Well I hate to say this but, while the music was fitting and sounded good, I had to strain to try and understand what most of the characters were saying. I suggest you get a better microphone for future works, cause the vocals were not very clear.
But overall, its an above average. I can't tell you how much I love the animation! This would have gone into my favorites if it weren't for the vocals (and the story too sort of...wasn't very original or interesting to remember). But tune up the vocal sound for future submissions and keep up the good work none the less. I'll be looking for more :)