It's good to laugh at oneself now and then..
Well, assuming you enjoy anime, at least...
As an anime fan, I can definitely appreciate this, as these sorts of cliche's are rampant, well..at least in what we receive a lot of in America..(Japanese always seem to keep the best stuff to themselves..or at least until they're done with it..)
Also, I've only been studying Japanese for a few years, but your skill and fluency is quite good. My one suggestion is that you get into your lines a bit more. They seem a little monotone most of the time...