noyse!
Seems pretty good. What the fuck, though....maybe it's just my monitor but I couldn't see hardly anything....too dark. I tried fucking with my monitor settings but it was no good. played it with the lights out too. finally had to give up because it turned into a clickfest with me hopin' i'd find something like a clue by clicking all over the screen. nobody else seems to be having this problem though, I read the other reviews. So maybe i just need to get my damn eyes checked. Other than that, it seems really good. wish i could see all of it.
Are you sure this is your first submission, though?
I remember playing a game almost exactly like this one a long time ago, almost the same storyline and all that, just that the graphics were simpler. anyone else on NG remember seeing that game? i forgot the name.
so I don't know how original this game's plot is, it definitely seems inspired by that other submission. maybe this author had a different login name back then or something. anyway, enough rambling.
--Crackhead