Reviews for Moonlight

[Metho-1]

......meh?

I don't think this deserves the number 1 spot on the portal. It was good not great. The storyline was sub-par and not original at all.

"This king dude like got posessed by like EVIL and sent all his "royal knights" to there death. Now he has no body guards and plays chess with himself all day long.

But there was a survivor and now he gets to cut the king in half and die in the process, teh end."

The style was so mainstream it wasn't funny, i think thats what annoyed me the most. You were trying a drawing style similiar to ninja resurection, and it came off looking more like Beyblades. Also the attempt to combine medievil/fantasy with anime/samurai just didn't work for me. I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this, and your an awesome animator, but next time STORYLINE FIRST.

[metalcat]

Good but needs polish

Overall animation was above average. Voice acting could use some work. It was difficult to understand what he was saying sometimes. Dialogue could use some tweaking. An example of this is when he says "Let's skip the little talk, shall we?" it should say small talk. Sound effects are off too. For example when he drops his sword in the end, it clangs before it hits the ground. I thought the story line was very bland. It's been done a million times. I think you need more mounting action leading to the climax of the story. All he does is fight some skeletons and then a Centaur, and then he's there. The story could stand to be better explained. Animation was a bit sketchy at times. For example when he opens the door to the throne room and the camera scrolls up, it isn't smooth. it's jumpy. Fix these problems and I think you'd have a great Flash animation.

[EvilBob2020]

good

the storyline is far too orignal...the hero saves his viallage or whatever or is seeking revenge...otherwise was great

[Taxman2A]

Good Flash...

however the story moves very slowly... It would be better to cut out some of the slower transition scenes and keep the action... Overall very good though... Outstanding art

[Zeeno]

Twas' ok.

The basic story was quite good, but the flash itself failed to keep my interest.
Your graphical style is better than most, but still lacks detail when needed.

B+