It was good...
You did a good job, and I can see a lot of hard work went into this flash. For that I commend you. However, your story is rather cliche. I do like the originality of him dying at the end. He had probably lost everything, and had a very fitting and well deserved death (Cause he could die satisfied with no regrets). Gave me goosebumps, that deathscene did. The whole "Well?!" thing was overdramatic and cliche. (Does he walk into haunted skeleton-infested graveyards often and expect this to happen? Haha, I kid, I kid.) I do like the variety of skeletons (gave it an obvious jump in quality). The king didn't seem possessed by evil, though. He didn't look very evil either. The last fight scene was so horribly cliche it had lost all meaning to me. Also, the overall background could have been developed to create a deeper meaning to the story, and evoke some extra emotions. But the animation, the sound(most of it), and a majority of the story did it good. This is quality work, fitting to be in the top 50 of the Portal.