Good graphics, shit script
The graphics were awesome, as was character design and thematic elements. The script was awful, though, as was the voice acting. Thank god there wasn't more dialogue. The words sounded trite and didn't go along with the setting of the story. C'mon. The hero could have said something better than, "Let's skip the little talk, shall we?" or "WELL?!(echo, echo)". In short, stick to animation (you're really very good), but next time, get someone with rudimentary knowledge of the english language to write for you, and for god's sake, get people who can act to dubb voices for your characters.