Reviews for Moonlight

[Metho-1]

......meh?

I don't think this deserves the number 1 spot on the portal. It was good not great. The storyline was sub-par and not original at all.

"This king dude like got posessed by like EVIL and sent all his "royal knights" to there death. Now he has no body guards and plays chess with himself all day long.

But there was a survivor and now he gets to cut the king in half and die in the process, teh end."

The style was so mainstream it wasn't funny, i think thats what annoyed me the most. You were trying a drawing style similiar to ninja resurection, and it came off looking more like Beyblades. Also the attempt to combine medievil/fantasy with anime/samurai just didn't work for me. I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this, and your an awesome animator, but next time STORYLINE FIRST.

[metalcat]

Good but needs polish

Overall animation was above average. Voice acting could use some work. It was difficult to understand what he was saying sometimes. Dialogue could use some tweaking. An example of this is when he says "Let's skip the little talk, shall we?" it should say small talk. Sound effects are off too. For example when he drops his sword in the end, it clangs before it hits the ground. I thought the story line was very bland. It's been done a million times. I think you need more mounting action leading to the climax of the story. All he does is fight some skeletons and then a Centaur, and then he's there. The story could stand to be better explained. Animation was a bit sketchy at times. For example when he opens the door to the throne room and the camera scrolls up, it isn't smooth. it's jumpy. Fix these problems and I think you'd have a great Flash animation.

[EvilBob2020]

good

the storyline is far too orignal...the hero saves his viallage or whatever or is seeking revenge...otherwise was great

[mmr09287]

sweat

this was a cool flash. The only down side is that it was short. But other than that it was cool

[LeFishy]

Ok...

It was ok. There were some fantastic moments in fact. The first arrow striking the floor for example was perfect in my opinion. But i found a lot of the action to be let down a lot by the sound. Nice animation though.