Allow me to be frank...
Okay, first off, it was kinda short, but was awesome nonetheless. The ending, with the two jumping at each other, was kinda cliched.
A lot of it is cliched now that I think about it, but it was beautifully done.
Allow me to be frank...
Okay, first off, it was kinda short, but was awesome nonetheless. The ending, with the two jumping at each other, was kinda cliched.
A lot of it is cliched now that I think about it, but it was beautifully done.
Good
I loved your story line this is an all around good flash
Kicked ass!!
Great story, he died a very honorable death!!! I am very proud.
Really good
What can I say? This blew my mind away. Really good, as I said.
great animation but needs some work
i have to admit the graphic work and animation is amazing, but like others said you need to work on the plot and script more. for instince what was the whole fairy thing in the begining? why is the pegasas have to be naked?(lol) besides that i think you have a lot of potential to make a great flash, just need some work on the plot and script. hope to see something great from you.