Good concept
It was pretty good, but there were mistakes, you should check the grammar. It was kinda slow and the sounds weren't the greatest, the punching/kicking noises were good, but the people's noises were delayed and you kept using them. Work on this some more and it'll be alot better.
Hey the blood splattering effect was pretty cool. Thanks for the replys ill try to fix that for the next one.
Not bad
It was good i want part 2 plez
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Patients my Crazy Game Junkie. I think it will be posted by thursday. Im useing a Free trial Flash Designer. And there's not much time left on it so bare with me.
My 2 cents
The intro was kind of long and you probably lose alot of people when they see all that writing. you should probably incorporate that into your flash instead of reading it b4 hand.. maybe a prequel? Well anyways i think it would run smoother without the next buttons. I loved the blood gurgle sound when they hit the ground though... keep it up
Yeah, I know, but dosen't mean you could skip it. But it was a good story line. Not to worry though, this is Part one. Part two wouldn't have an Intro Storyline.
good on paper
You got a nice storyline going one with this, I must admit. But there of course is some massive glaring problems. The severe amount of text in the beginning is one. Flash movies are meant to be watched, not read. second, the frame rate is WAY too slow. up it to about 18. third, try and work on the sound effects cause the "oh!" sfx comes in way too late on the guy. just fix those errors and I'll hope to see more out of you.
Actualy I think the frame rates fine. The frame rate was 0.05. Sorry about the sound effects. But that sound effect when the Blonde guy hit that wal, was that cool, or what?
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Ha that was kinda neat, i like the game sprite backrounds, the whole button thing is ok, but it just slows down the story but its not that big of a deal, it made me laugh cause those characters from that game are so cute heh, anyways funny flash...
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