good on paper
You got a nice storyline going one with this, I must admit. But there of course is some massive glaring problems. The severe amount of text in the beginning is one. Flash movies are meant to be watched, not read. second, the frame rate is WAY too slow. up it to about 18. third, try and work on the sound effects cause the "oh!" sfx comes in way too late on the guy. just fix those errors and I'll hope to see more out of you.
Actualy I think the frame rates fine. The frame rate was 0.05. Sorry about the sound effects. But that sound effect when the Blonde guy hit that wal, was that cool, or what?
Not too bad
But i've seen better, there was too much text and the way the button keep moving around was frustrating and anyway buttons are annoying. The movement was a lil jerky, and the sound wasn't always in sync. Other than that this was a pretty good movie.
A Flash need's a good story, and it didn't really hurt to Read.
NICE!
nice stuff man I can't wait to see part two! ^_^
No problem dude. The next one wil have Ryan, And thats when the shit really hits the Fan.
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i gave you a zero on style and graphics cause you used sprites but this was cool. good job
Well ya, I used Sprites. Its a Video Game Parody. Oh, and that Gun, at the Ending I got that off the Terminator Game for the NES.
nice movie
youre good with sprites oh yea and the lurch he mispelled it cause he wanted to make the movie more gangsterish
Thanks for backing me up dude.....Lurch Knows what Dude is right?....... LOL Its a Joke Lurch.