DBZ Clone
make the graphics better, less DBZ and you have a animation that is good for the top 3 all times.The music was really good
Reviews for "Syphen Transformation"
23450 responds:
Top 3 of all time? lol. Not yet, but some time i hope.
Decent
This animation was decent. Sure it may look like DBZ to some, but so? There were points were the transformation flowed pretty well. I think you did a rather good job on this. I wouldn't mind seeing what you have in store for the storyline. I did give you a low score because of a few things. You need to put a replay button on the end. Would have been nice if he had been growling like an animal (Please no dbz sounds, that'll just lower the score.) And maybe the disgusting crackling of bones sliding through skin for when his wings came out. And some other things for certain parts in the transformation. That would have made it a bit better. Oh and, when he punches through the guy, make it more apparent that he does so. Like a SPLURG sound or maybe even the guy screaming in pain. Just a few suggestions. Good luck with further projects.
23450 responds:
Ok, i am writing this review almost 2 years later. I did work on a flash with this guy. i got alot done, but it never did work out. I might release it some day, maybe. i had fun amking it though.
Pretty average...
The graphics and the main idea of this has been done so many times.... The music was nice and gave it some style though.
The black and white drawing at the end was great.
23450 responds:
Well its a better review then most people gave me. And thanks for liking the picture i drew.
Wouldn't have been bad..
if it wasn't Goku's super saiyan transformation's twin. The art and animation weren't bad, except everything from the neck muscle twitching to the eyes, hair, and eyebrows screamed Goku. Put some original content in there to support your character or you may as well just call him Goku or Goku's evil twin.
23450 responds:
well my art skills did origonate from dbz so its going to look like dbz. But i did change to nose and eyes.
The DBZ appearance is distracting
Yea, you're tired of hearing it but I would have rather seen something more original. The art in itself was pretty decent.
23450 responds:
Thanks. I have worked on my art for a long time, i hope it meets people standards a little better now.