The DBZ appearance is distracting
Yea, you're tired of hearing it but I would have rather seen something more original. The art in itself was pretty decent.
Reviews for "Syphen Transformation"
23450 responds:
Thanks. I have worked on my art for a long time, i hope it meets people standards a little better now.
Decent
This animation was decent. Sure it may look like DBZ to some, but so? There were points were the transformation flowed pretty well. I think you did a rather good job on this. I wouldn't mind seeing what you have in store for the storyline. I did give you a low score because of a few things. You need to put a replay button on the end. Would have been nice if he had been growling like an animal (Please no dbz sounds, that'll just lower the score.) And maybe the disgusting crackling of bones sliding through skin for when his wings came out. And some other things for certain parts in the transformation. That would have made it a bit better. Oh and, when he punches through the guy, make it more apparent that he does so. Like a SPLURG sound or maybe even the guy screaming in pain. Just a few suggestions. Good luck with further projects.
23450 responds:
Ok, i am writing this review almost 2 years later. I did work on a flash with this guy. i got alot done, but it never did work out. I might release it some day, maybe. i had fun amking it though.
looks familiar..
looks like another DBZ movie...
23450 responds:
damn im getting tired of this. It LOOKS like dbz but it is not dbz.Do you see a goku or a super sayain because i sure as hell dont.
Pretty good ..
DBZ, right ? Wings might've looked better if they popped open 50% transparent against background. Music ends abruptly, needs fade-out if nothing else.
Nice graphics & animation, busy music.
David
23450 responds:
Its not supposed to be DBZ, but my art style was much liek it for sure.
Pretty average...
The graphics and the main idea of this has been done so many times.... The music was nice and gave it some style though.
The black and white drawing at the end was great.
23450 responds:
Well its a better review then most people gave me. And thanks for liking the picture i drew.