it was ok
you did a good job with plot, but you totally stole the title of the story " The Most Dangerous Game"; written by Richard Connell in the 1920's and 1930's.
Next time name it something that hasn't already been used. So do a little research first.
Blue upon blue eyes
LOL! "I am the kyzwatz haderach!" I think that's how it's spelled. I'll have to check my Dune novels. That was great! I'm gonna read the comic book now!
Funny!!
I loved it! The "Phantasm" and "Dune" references was well done. I'm going to check out your other stuff now.
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lol
lol that was pretty good