At 11/2/06 02:23 PM, Zwickel wrote: http://www.newground..m/portal/view/347363

My newest stuff, I hope it doesn't get overlooked.
Please submit it to the Halloween Collection!

Thanks!

I fived and added to collection, nice work!

At 11/2/06 02:37 AM, MrSaladin wrote: Hey all.

This is some character concept art for my upcoming Flash on a mock-up of the preloader screen. It features the main character Qynn, and his blue side-kick. I know the background/scenery looks like complete crap, I'm looking for ways to make the street and sidewalk look better.

All comments and criticism greatly appreciated. :D

Link:
http://img182.images..efpreloaderscyn5.jpg

+++ Love the text's ornate pattern.

++ Disregarding the red font, I kinda like the colour scheme. The blue dude and blue eyes stand out against the red/green thing.

-- The red comic-book style font doesn't match too well.

-- Shadows suggest light from back. But shadows on actual bodies contradict this.

- Shoulder socket seems a tad low

- hands too small

- clouds go to bottom of 'horizon'. As it is, combined with the sudden angle of the pavement as it rounds the 'curve', I can only assume that they're on a very steep descent, that begins with a corner, pretty much.

- legs of dude are too static.

That's all I could pinpoint.

Of course, this is just my opinion.

Thanks alot. :D

I too hate the legs of Qynn. I'm probably going to redo them, don't look like he's properly standing at all. And yeah, they're supposed to be on one side of a rather steep hill, hence the clouds being down against the pavement line like that. If it looks to weird I can change it - the situation isn't actually in the Flash, it's just something to look at while it loads.

There's a reason for that comic-book style font, but I will probably change it to not be so jarring.

And yeah; I love that ornate font too. :)

Thanks again for the breakdown.

At 11/2/06 04:41 PM, British-Moose wrote: http://denvish.net/u..e%20game_running.php

This is a run cycle I made. I don't usually work with tweens. Does it look choppy?

Please comment :)

yes it looks very choppy, he also doesnt move up and down enough, and you dont get the feeling that he has legs let alone that theyre moving. so maybe you should be able to see some of his foot or something. and if you act all defensive you are an ass because you asked for criticism. <-sorry just making sure YOU NEVER KNOW ON NEWGROUNDS

At 11/2/06 04:41 PM, British-Moose wrote: http://denvish.net/u..e%20game_running.php

Not too choppy atall, pretty nice :) Pretty neat style too!

At 11/2/06 04:47 PM, British-Moose wrote: I am not 13 years old. When asking for comments I expect criticism. GOSH!

You dont need to be 13 to be a cock. Thx for being gud about it. I think the arms culd use more inbetweens also.

At 11/2/06 05:41 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: ...just felt like posting this, damn it! ;P

This reminds me a lot of the hero portraits in the Heroes of Might and Magic PC games. Nice job, I love the coloring.

British Moose. What you should also do it contain that whole thing in another graphic, and tween that going up and down but more rapidly.

Also, when the hands come forward have them not so 'on level' with the face if you get me. The face should rise above them or the hands above the head just so there is more movement.

And yes, more on the arms.

I dont know if i posted this already but heres princess peach. if i did then I fixed her up a little.

At 11/3/06 09:41 PM, wegra2006 wrote: I dont know if i posted this already but heres princess peach. if i did then I fixed her up a little.

I have not seen it before. I can see it´s peach, but that´s about it. You need to fix her up even more, actually a lot more. It´s way to messy. I can´t find a single straight line in the picture, and you can also try to add some shading.

lolfunminute

I was bored..

Wupii, I have a sig now! What do you think?

Happy 1300!

This is a piece of my Halloween Art Contest entry.
The full piece is
here.
Didn't win anything, unfortunately, but I still had a really good time making it.

At 11/4/06 12:01 PM, mynamewontfitin wrote: Happy 1300!

This is a piece of my Halloween Art Contest entry.
The full piece is
here.
Didn't win anything, unfortunately, but I still had a really good time making it.

Thats amazingly good. You deserve to have won something. The textures are nice and overall its excellent.

At 11/4/06 12:01 PM, mynamewontfitin wrote: Happy 1300!

Looks like the characters are constructed out of playdo and the background is a cardboard cut out. But in a good way..

Didn't you do another one too?

Here is my two:
* -
Tony Hawks Pro Zombie
* - Angelina Jolie/Tombraider

Woo!! 1,300 pages, damn those pages just fly by.

I used to always post up my collab pieces in here, so I'll do that now. It's for the Don't Panic Collab, as a whole from what I've seen the collab should be good and was run more smoothly and efficiently than any collab I've been a part of.

At 11/4/06 08:00 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Woo!! 1,300 pages, damn those pages just fly by.

How ironic that that didn't make the 1300 page cut.

Don't panic collab

Ah yes.. better send mine over

At 11/4/06 08:07 PM, Mogly-PullTigerTail wrote:

At 11/4/06 08:00 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Woo!! 1,300 pages, damn those pages just fly by.

How ironic that that didn't make the 1300 page cut.

Isn't it just. BlackmarketKraig is sad. ='(

At 11/4/06 09:15 PM, ShirtTurtle wrote:
I think its great.
It has an awesome sense of emotion about it.
Nice graphics too.

Thank you very much, ShirtTurtle. =D

Just a picture of my room,
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btw
DON'T LET THIS THREAD DIE!

At 11/5/06 03:49 PM, Boxkitten wrote: DON'T LET THIS THREAD DIE!

I hope it necer will :). Also, nice pic, very dark, lol.

At 11/5/06 03:52 PM, Depredation wrote: I hope it necer will :). Also, nice pic, very dark, lol.

Sorry, i meant nicer. Anyway, what do you think of my first ever image edit, made in fireworks.

It's a parody of one of Toms Pics :D.

At 11/5/06 03:57 PM, Depredation wrote: what do you think of my first ever image edit, made in fireworks.
It's a parody of one of Toms Pics :D.

...well done! :D

This is [my idea of] a Yeti ...was gonna be for the alphabet collab, but looks like everyone else is just doing stick, so I bowed out. Figured I'd post him here before filing him away in my "Shit I'll Never Finish" folder. :(

At 11/6/06 12:01 AM, ReNaeNae wrote:\

This is [my idea of] a Yeti ...was gonna be for the alphabet collab, but looks like everyone else is just doing stick, so I bowed out. Figured I'd post him here before filing him away in my "Shit I'll Never Finish" folder. :(

Sweet yeti. They would wear overalls, wouldn't they?

At 11/6/06 12:07 AM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: At 11/6/06 12:01 AM, ReNaeNae wrote:\

This is [my idea of] a Yeti ...was gonna be for the alphabet collab, but looks like everyone else is just doing stick, so I bowed out. Figured I'd post him here before filing him away in my "Shit I'll Never Finish" folder. :(

Sweet yeti. They would wear overalls, wouldn't they?

Of course ;)

just another boxkitten picture
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At 11/6/06 12:01 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: This is [my idea of] a Yeti

Nice job Renae... I agree that collab was a huge fucking disappointment.

At 11/7/06 05:58 AM, Boxkitten wrote: just another boxkitten picture
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I like....very good pic.

A simple pic