Could you guys review my latest work please?

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/46 7630

I may be coming back in 2 weeks.
Rejoice :P

Wow, I haven't been on newgrounds in like forever. Check out my new song.

Depth of Thought

Requests list as posted by perfect-insanity on page 196 (those requests should be done until Sunday, the 9th):
If your request does not appear on the list below, you probably made your request between late Thursday and now. Your request will be added to the next list on Thursday.

General Rules for Requesters:
If you are planning on requesting reviews, please:
- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
- Make no more than 3 requests within one week.
- Do us a favour and respond to our reviews.
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you request.
- Do NOT request without posting a link.
- Do NOT just say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.

General Rules for New Reviewers:
If you are planning on completing requests, please do the following:
- Post in this thread to let us know you'd like to join.
- Understand the points system and keep track of your own score. You will only be added to the list if you post your own score within the first week.

Points:
**Please also keep track of your own points. If you see something missing, it's probably a mistake**
**To be on the list, you must make at least one review, posters only will not be counted**
5 points for a review on a requested movie/game
7 points for a review on a requested audio
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review
3 points for posting at least once throughout the week
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post)
7 points for reviewing all requests/recommendations for that week

Movie Requests:(2)
FlashSaga1: Daily 5th by Everett (mexifry895)
FlashSaga2: Space by Everett (mexifry895)

Game Requests:(2)
How Shall He Die 1 - M136 by Murad136
Instawin by Michael (wegra2007)

Audio Requests:(14)
rock song? by mikkim
[LY] ,-Mayosun-', by la-yinn
Hallowed Souls by Jeffaro
The Three Commandments by Lenard Keenan (LenardNotLenny)
TransAmbient Loop by jxl180
<==Stomp the Sand==> by DjCompass
Skela - Mighty by Skela
You are banned by shadowchaotailsevil3
Brass City by Everett (mexifry895)
Adventure in Outer Space by Everett (mexifry895)
JuMP3r - Bounce! by Jump3r
[Brawl 8-Bit] Brawl Theme by loogiesquared
[Brawl 8-Bit] KK Rider by loogiesquared

Spotlighted Recommendations:

You get points for reviewing recommendations as if they were requests.
You may make a recommendation if you reviewed 100% of the previous week's requests and recommendations. It should be over 3 days old and have under 50 reviews.

Points | Stats | % rate | weekly | user
01. 8013 | 1060/1140 | 092.98 | 10/10 | Coop83
02. 6091 | 0797/0800 | 099.63 | 10/10 | Haggard
03. 4049 | 0532/0796 | 066.83 | 10/10 | Shanus
04. 3398 | 0498/1166 | 042.71 | 01/10 | Milinko959
05. 2707 | 0385/1166 | 033.02 | 00/10 | Bezman
06. 2696 | 0344/0344 | 100.00 | 10/10 | Corky52
07. 1479 | 0190/0190 | 100.00 | 10/10 | perfect-insanity
08. 1051 | 0136/0683 | 019.91 | 00/10 | WritersBlock***
09. 0545 | 0070/0070 | 100.00 | 10/10 | Deflektor
10. 0401 | 0055/0170 | 032.35 | 00/10 | Marsupial*
11. 0181 | 0026/0147 | 017.69 | 00/10 | Mrputter**
12. 0166 | 0021/0070 | 030.00 | 10/10 | la-yinn
13. 0078 | 0010/0010 | 100.00 | 10/10 | sirtom93

The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks
****: User has been inactive for the last four weeks

If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.

Requests this week: 10
Total all time: 1166
Review this Week: 61
Average per member: 4.69
Average per request: 6.10

New To the List:
sirtom93

Leaving the List :( :
phantomlassuk

All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Shanus, Corky52, perfect-insanity, Deflektor, la-yinn, sirtom93

Additional Comments: Sorry for being a day late, I've been sick for likea week or so. Kinda making everything difficult to do. Listened to Cookin' with the Miles Davis Quintet while making the list.

At 11/3/08 07:33 PM, Shadow-1409 wrote: I may be coming back in 2 weeks.
Rejoice :P

Boo :P

At 11/4/08 12:54 PM, Shanus wrote: Instawin by Michael (wegra2007)

Ah, too bad. I wanted to suggest to take that submission off the list, as it is in fact a spam submission. :(
Anyway, a hughe amount of audio requests. Let's see if I can get them done...

Points | Stats | % rate | weekly | user

Thanks for the update!

01. 8013 | 1060/1140 | 092.98 | 10/10 | Coop83
02. 6091 | 0797/0800 | 099.63 | 10/10 | Haggard
03. 4049 | 0532/0796 | 066.83 | 10/10 | Shanus

A good week. I could have done 800 reviews for this club already and I've done 797... which is amazing, because it means that about 60% of all my reviews come from this club.

New To the List:
sirtom93

Hi!

Leaving the List :( :
phantomlassuk

Bye... :(
Too bad. Her reviews are pretty good.

All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Shanus, Corky52, perfect-insanity, Deflektor, la-yinn, sirtom93

A slightly bigger list than last time, but there's still room for improvement! :P

At 11/3/08 07:33 PM, Shadow-1409 wrote: I may be coming back in 2 weeks.
Rejoice :P

Boo :P

Screw you bitch!
>:(

• Unpublished Submission

• Unpublished Submission

=)

Yay for being new to the list :3. So would I be right in saying a list is written twice a week? Or would I be completely wrong.

At 11/4/08 12:54 PM, Shanus wrote:

Movie Requests:(2)

A nice small amount. It would be nice to get a couple more flash requests a week though. When my audio reviews catch up to my flash reviews I might actually have a hard time keeping them even. I might have to start picking up my flash reviews soon.

Game Requests:(2)
How Shall He Die 1 - M136 by Murad136

Not the best at games yet, but you guys should have seen where he started out and should have saw the movies/games of his that were blammed. He really is getting better and even if it's a slow process that's better than nothing.

Instawin by Michael (wegra2007)

Oh no we let a spam game get through. :P That's alright I already reviewed it and it did have just a little bit of humor in it so it's not too bad.

Audio Requests:(14)

A nice list of audio reviews. Not too many and still enough for me to get some reviews in. Not bad at all.

Spotlighted Recommendations:

Oh shit... I forgot.. I guess I just don't really have the time for it. Oh well, I'm sure I will find one sooner or later.

04. 3398 | 0498/1166 | 042.71 | 01/10 | Milinko959

Several weeks and I can go for passing another on the list. It's going to be nice being up in the top 5 of this club. :)

05. 2707 | 0385/1166 | 033.02 | 00/10 | Bezman

Oh no you couldn't get to reviewing this week. :( Don't let me pass you up without a fight.. not yet anyway.

06. 2696 | 0344/0344 | 100.00 | 10/10 | Corky52

I'm still moving ever so closely.. and slowly to 400 reviews for this club. Still at 100 percent. I think I have all of the reviews done already for this week, but I will check in tomorrow sometime to make sure.

New To the List:
sirtom93

Welcome sirtom93. Maybe this will get your audio reviews up past mine again. :( Not good news for me, but oh well can't stay ahead of everyone all the time I guess.

Leaving the List :( :
phantomlassuk

Ah, finally taken off the list. Goodbye to a good reviewer.

All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Shanus, Corky52, perfect-insanity, Deflektor, la-yinn, sirtom93

Much better than last week. Let's keep this up guys.

At 11/4/08 04:38 PM, sirtom93 wrote: Yay for being new to the list :3. So would I be right in saying a list is written twice a week? Or would I be completely wrong.

The first list is some sort of reminder and the second list is the official list I guess. I really only pay attention to this list.

At 11/4/08 12:54 PM, Shanus wrote: Movie Requests:(2)
Game Requests:(2)
Audio Requests:(14)

Thanks for the update, Shanus. It's a shame that we don't see many Flash requests these days.

Points | Stats | % rate | weekly | user
01. 8013 | 1060/1140 | 092.98 | 10/10 | Coop83
02. 6091 | 0797/0800 | 099.63 | 10/10 | Haggard

Ah, still the same old, same old. Holy crap, 8k points...

All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Shanus, Corky52, perfect-insanity, Deflektor, la-yinn, sirtom93

8 completers this week. Meh, there were only 10 requests. Now that it's up to 19 for the week, we'll separate the men from the boys.

CLUB INFO
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General Rules for Requesters:
If you are planning on requesting reviews, please:
- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
- Make no more than 3 requests within one week.
- Do us a favour and respond to our reviews.
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you request.
- Do NOT request without posting a link.
- Do NOT just say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.

General Rules for New Reviewers:
If you are planning on completing requests, please do the following:
- Post in this thread to let us know you'd like to join.
- Understand the points system and keep track of your own score. You will only be added to the list if you post your own score within the first week.

Points:
**Please also keep track of your own points. If you see something missing, it's probably a mistake**
**To be on the list, you must make at least one review, posters only will not be counted**
5 points for a review on a requested movie/game
7 points for a review on a requested audio
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review
3 points for posting at least once throughout the week
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post)
7 points for reviewing all requests/recommendations for that week

Club updates
Each Sunday or Monday, Shanus or Haggard currently create a list of all the members, counting up their points, calculating various stats and posting a list of requested submissions. Assuming you review the submissions listed, you will get points for them on the following members' update, 6 or 7 days later.

On Thursday, perfect-insanity creates a list of all requests and recommendations made since the previous Thursday. This can be considered a 'preview' of the list that will accompany the following members' update on Sunday/Monday. The points for these are tallied 10 days later.

Requests made between the 'preview list' and the 'members' update' carry over to the next preview list. So you will always have over 9 days to finish the reviews. (Feel free to review submissions as soon as they are requested!)

FAQ
Should I link to the club in my sig?
There's no obligation to do so, but it's certainly appreciated. Remember that you can put a high number in place of the page number in the url and if that page doesn't exist yet, NG will take you to the latest page, whatever it is.

So if you link to: http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/4834 48/999
then anyone following that link will always see the latest page.

I don't understand what recommendations are all about!
As mentioned under this section in each list, 'You may make a recommendation if you reviewed 100% of the previous weeks requests and recommendations. It should be over 3 days old and have under 50 reviews.'

As long as your name is on the last 'All requests completed' list, feel free to recommend something you've enjoyed from the portal.

You could use this to let us know about something you think is specially awesome, yet overlooked. If there aren't many game or movie requests, maybe you could make a recommendation so we have something to review.

Does the Review Request Club review stuff for non-NG stuff?
Short answer: no.

Long answer: Milinko used to include youtube requests in the list of requests, but the introduction of a points system didn't leave room for such things. You can request reviews here, but some of us may not have accounts on Myspace/Youtube/whatever or may simply be disinclined to review things outside NG. It wouldn't get nearly as much attention compared to if it were a NG submission.

I'd suggest putting songs on the AP, then making a request that way. It lets us give feedback whilst staying on our favourite site. ;-)

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If a new page hase begun and this info has not been posted yet, please copy the plaintext version and post it, thus keeping this info at the top of each page.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1 84929\

hello again every one.

that song is the conclusion to my series of loops and short songs, i think it is my best and it deserves your attention :D

please and thank you!

At 11/2/08 11:03 PM, Gustavos wrote: Excuse me people, but my latest movie is in need of more people to see it. You can tell by the number of votes and reveiws and whatnot. So considering this being a Reveiw club, I'd very much like to ask that some of you watch the movie and write a simple reveiw, and maybe even vote.

Note: careful with your choice of vote, the small number of ones this received makes everything very dynamic. You could blam it and it might go down 0.04 or something.

I'd surely join if I have to, and put a link to this club in my sig so that other animators that don't know of this place will have somewhere to go.

As this guy's friend, and the one who recommended that he come here for some constructive criticism, I'm going to bump this message to show you missed his movie. Just because I take an interest in this dude, an old friend from my anti-KK days.

At 11/5/08 09:19 PM, SoulMaster71 wrote:

At 11/2/08 11:03 PM, Gustavos wrote: Excuse me people, but my latest movie is in need of more people to see it. You can tell by the number of votes and reveiws and whatnot. So considering this being a Reveiw club, I'd very much like to ask that some of you watch the movie and write a simple reveiw, and maybe even vote.

Note: careful with your choice of vote, the small number of ones this received makes everything very dynamic. You could blam it and it might go down 0.04 or something.

I'd surely join if I have to, and put a link to this club in my sig so that other animators that don't know of this place will have somewhere to go.

As this guy's friend, and the one who recommended that he come here for some constructive criticism, I'm going to bump this message to show you missed his movie. Just because I take an interest in this dude, an old friend from my anti-KK days.

His request was not missed, the list on which his request will be appearing will be put up tomorrow and when the next list done up by Shanus gets put up, it will be on there as well. All the reviews that will be made for that request will be posted at the latest by November 16

At 11/5/08 10:02 PM, perfect-insanity wrote:

At 11/5/08 09:19 PM, SoulMaster71 wrote:

At 11/2/08 11:03 PM, Gustavos wrote: Excuse me people, but my latest movie is in need of more people to see it. You can tell by the number of votes and reveiws and whatnot. So considering this being a Reveiw club, I'd very much like to ask that some of you watch the movie and write a simple reveiw, and maybe even vote.

Note: careful with your choice of vote, the small number of ones this received makes everything very dynamic. You could blam it and it might go down 0.04 or something.

I'd surely join if I have to, and put a link to this club in my sig so that other animators that don't know of this place will have somewhere to go.

As this guy's friend, and the one who recommended that he come here for some constructive criticism, I'm going to bump this message to show you missed his movie. Just because I take an interest in this dude, an old friend from my anti-KK days.

Thanks man, the only thing that might have come from the request is a single vote, but that's impossible to tell.

His request was not missed, the list on which his request will be appearing will be put up tomorrow and when the next list done up by Shanus gets put up, it will be on there as well. All the reviews that will be made for that request will be posted at the latest by November 16

Your club rules confuse me. All regular reveiwers reveiw movies only at a certain time, in this case sometime before November 16? Why not when the original request is made? Please explain your methods.

Well I have a request Punkin Shoot

I submitted this a short time ago, just a simple shooting game.

At 11/6/08 12:54 AM, Gustavos wrote: Your club rules confuse me. All regular reveiwers reveiw movies only at a certain time, in this case sometime before November 16? Why not when the original request is made? Please explain your methods.

Because members of this club have a life. We don't sit in front of the computer all day just to fulfill requests made in this thread.
Also, the list system helps to keep track of the requests made. Otherwise it would be just too confusing for members.

So, you just have to be patient, we WILL get around and review your request. ;)

Yeah, I had a date last weekend so didn't review. I'll resume reviewing in a couple of weeks or less.

At 11/6/08 12:54 AM, Gustavos wrote: Your club rules confuse me. All regular reveiwers reveiw movies only at a certain time, in this case sometime before November 16? Why not when the original request is made? Please explain your methods.

Compiling them into a list adds convenience and ensures none are missed.

Delaying a deadline ensure we have time to appraise them properly and can fit them wherever we want into our lives.

Personally, even if I check out an audio track immediately, I wouldn't want to review it immediately - I'd rather wait a whileto ensure my first impressions are correct. I feel a track that I hand out 8 or above to should have real lasting appeal.

At 11/6/08 09:43 AM, Haggard wrote: Because members of this club have a life.

We do?

At 11/6/08 10:31 AM, Bezman wrote:

At 11/6/08 09:43 AM, Haggard wrote: Because members of this club have a life.

We do?

Don't destroy my illusions. :(

To reviewers - this is the list of requests made between the last update and now. It's a 'preview' of the list that will be posted on Sunday or Monday - Haggard or Shanus will probably tally the points for these reviews in 9 days time - on the 16th November. If you haven't already completed them, I suggest you first review some stuff from Shanus' list on page 196.

To requestors - if you made a request since my last list and it is not listed below, I have made a mistake. Being human, I may potentially have gotten the link wrong. Let me know in either case.
If you make a request after this post, it won't be included until next Thursday/Friday's update.
The Sunday/Monday list is just a repost of this.

General Rules for Requesters:
If you are planning on requesting reviews, please:
- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
- Make no more than 3 requests within one week.
- Respond to reviews.
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you request.
- Do NOT request without posting a link.
- Do NOT just say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.

Movie Requests:(2)
Nintendo Story ep 3 by Gustavos
You Can Only Dream by Fierce-deity490

Game Requests:(1)
Punkin Shoot by Lord-Of-Lazyness

Audio Requests:(4)
Depth of Thought by Archmage (TheBellmaker)
Epic!.. lol by MishapsConundrum
Fast Action by MishapsConundrum
All Night Party 11 by no name (mariomusicmaker1)

Spotlighted Recommendations:

You get points for reviewing recommendations as if they were requests.
You may make a recommendation if you reviewed 100% of the previous week's requests and recommendations. It should be over 3 days old and have under 50 reviews.

This list is certified spam free

Plaintext Version can be found here

News just in, supposedly the broadband we ordered months ago will finally be installed this week. Here's to fingers crossed. Maybe I'll be able to update a bit more regularly from no on. I'll keep you guys informed :D

• 

  into the darkness.

  by mikkim

  kindof large be warned

  Loop

  Industrial

  1,083 Views

  PLAY

I'm not sure if i joined already, but i'm in.

• 

  vortex^2

  by mikkim

  the darkness is soon going to be wining...

  Loop

  Techno

  721 Views

  PLAY

• 

  mac8 - dawn after the fight

  by mikkim

  dawn after the fight

  Song

  Ambient

  823 Views

  PLAY
• 

  dance latin

  by mikkim

  It's a song

  Song

  Industrial

  822 Views

  PLAY
• 

  son of osiros

  by mikkim

  some wiread strings thing

  Song

  Miscellaneous

  813 Views

  PLAY
• 

  march of the emporer

  by mikkim

  I actully made a piece that has melodic scaling/timing

  Song

  Techno

  801 Views

  PLAY
• 

  warrior NES

  by mikkim

  The NES rocks and will fight you to the death if u don't see it's asomeNES

  Song

  Video Game

  834 Views

  PLAY
• 

  beep song

  by mikkim

  repeated beeps 2 make music

  Song

  Ambient

  1,025 Views

  PLAY
• 

  sur ur ur ur ender

  by mikkim

  simple song

  Song

  Techno

  827 Views

  PLAY
• 

  hard style techno

  by mikkim

  A piece of reggular tecno

  Song

  Techno

  1,074 Views

  PLAY

Try doing this:

• 

  The Blue Button - Harder

  by iMate900

  The Blue Button - an OK alternate to The Big Red Button - no humor though

  Game

  5,841 Views

  (Everyone)

And I'm in!

Scored 35 points currently. May do more, but points are counted today aren't they? Been quite busy this week.

At 11/8/08 08:25 PM, Deflektor wrote: Damn, i couldn't even do a single request. Too bad, i did every request since i entered the club, until now. Well, it had to happen one day or another. I have to stop being so perfectionist.
At 11/9/08 08:11 AM, sirtom93 wrote: Scored 35 points currently. May do more, but points are counted today aren't they? Been quite busy this week.

To both of you, I won't be doing the update till later on Monday, because of my college and limited internet at home. So you've got over a day to get some points :D

To both of you, I won't be doing the update till later on Monday, because of my college and limited internet at home. So you've got over a day to get some points :D

Oh shweet beef. So err, do I always have to say my own score, or is that just for first time.

At 11/9/08 09:50 AM, sirtom93 wrote:

To both of you, I won't be doing the update till later on Monday, because of my college and limited internet at home. So you've got over a day to get some points :D

Oh shweet beef. So err, do I always have to say my own score, or is that just for first time.

Just for the first time.