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The Elite Guard Barracks

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 00:17:09


At 7/24/07 12:02 AM, Couch-tater wrote: Sir. Reporting for duty Sir.! Ive been trained for sniper training, hand to hand, weapon emplacements, medic, and squad leader Sir.! honored to be in the elite guard barracks Sir.! im getting tired of saying Sir., Sir.!

Request refused citizen, it appears you only read five sentences into the first post. Go rack up some Goddamn B/P and stop improperly using punctuation marks!

My favorite song as of now would have to be Echoes of Infinity, hope I didn't get the name wrong....


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 01:08:40


At 7/23/07 11:43 PM, Andrea364 wrote: Well, I'm -100 b/p from hitting EGP again, *sigh* if only this damned redesign hadn't happened I wouldn't be in this position! * goes on and on until someone says "WE GET THE POINT ALREADY, MOVE ON WITH YOUR LIFE!" *

Very cool that you're close to being "in" again. =)

At 7/23/07 10:09 PM, EagleRock wrote: After a second or two, he spit it out and started choking.
Wonder what caused that... Seems like the mess's food is rather unsatifacory or a new 'grade D' type of food. Either that or Dark is faking it to scare us...

~
My thought right away was that he was screwing with everybody.
I want a gun in the story already! I want to KILL KILL KILL!!! hehe

Some good answers to the poll so far, folks. I'll give all those a listen when I get home. =)

For those of you who missed the poll the RSQ POLL question was "What is your favorite song in the audio portal? Please provide a link."

And for those of you who don't go there, you're missing out on a very awesome part of NG. You can even add favorites over there now which is awesome and the MP3 player they have now rocks!

~RSQ out

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 01:14:32


Goddamn it, it looks like the blam animation is no more. I just finished off a UJ flash, and all I got was this. :-(

WE ARE NOT AMUSED.

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 02:42:25


At 7/24/07 01:14 AM, SlashFirestorm wrote: Goddamn it, it looks like the blam animation is no more. I just finished off a UJ flash, and all I got was this. :-(

WE ARE NOT AMUSED.

I was wondering about that... THAT SUCKS! They need to either add it back in, or get a new one.

*saddened*

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 02:49:56


Another great chapter EagleRock, sir, comment is in the EGB forums as usual (I wonder if ILC has noticed that I have stormed past his post count yet?)

For those of you who missed the poll the RSQ POLL question was "What is your favorite song in the audio portal? Please provide a link."

I don't really have a favourite, I just listen to things at random when I am in there (which is rare). I tend to prefer the classical music, and especially piano as I used to play. Sorry, no links :(

At 7/24/07 01:14 AM, SlashFirestorm wrote: Goddamn it, it looks like the blam animation is no more. I just finished off a UJ flash, and all I got was this. :-(

WE ARE NOT AMUSED.

I noticed that the other day- hopefully they are just coming up with new ones, and haven't set them up yet. I'm going to miss the old protect movie though :(.

*salutes*


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 03:00:23


For those of you who missed the poll the RSQ POLL question was "What is your favorite song in the audio portal? Please provide a link."
I don't really have a favourite, I just listen to things at random when I am in there (which is rare). I tend to prefer the classical music, and especially piano as I used to play. Sorry, no links :(

Yeah, I don't have fav's saved except for one right now since it's a new feature, but I'll be sure to start saving them. FOR SURE!

At 7/24/07 01:14 AM, SlashFirestorm wrote: Goddamn it, it looks like the blam animation is no more.
I noticed that the other day- hopefully they are just coming up with new ones, and haven't set them up yet. I'm going to miss the old protect movie though :(.

No fret! You can swatch it on your own time Right HERE!!! Yay!!! (although you probably already knew that)

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 03:06:30


Rank // Total B/P points // Gain // Gain/day // Gain rise/drop // Name

01 // 54118 // 494 // 35.3 // 11.6- // X-Naut
02 // 53992 // 407 // 29.1 // 02.7+ // Phantom
03 // 52389 // 000 // 00.0 // 00.0+ // ADT
04 // 51048 // 211 // 15.1 // 21.8- // BlueHippo
05 // 49603 // 516 // 36.9 // 38.9- // pepeatumi
06 // 47150 // 275 // 19.6 // 17.0- // Major-punk
07 // 40275 // 876 // 62.6 // 06.7+ // Seamonky
08 // 37595 // 721 // 51.5 // 16.6- // Sentio
09 // 32966 // 138 // 09.9 // 09.5+ // SlashFirestorm
10 // 32811 // 328 // 23.4 // 23.4+ // EagleRock
11 // 30752 // 072 // 05.1 // 02.2- // ArtDanVal
12 // 30080 // 711 // 50.8 // 12.9- // pwroftheseagoat +1
13 // 30000 // 000 // 00.0 // 00.0+ // life -1
14 // 29246 // 000 // 00.0 // 00.0+ // Hemlok
15 // 28197 // 313 // 22.4 // 08.9- // MadCow
16 // 28022 // 445 // 31.8 // 07.3- // Coop83
17 // 26213 // 025 // 01.8 // 01.6- // LittleWashu
18 // 24521 // 066 // 04.7 // 05.2- // MetalDart
19 // 22465 // 969 // 69.2 // 03.4- // PenguinLink
20 // 17889 // 245 // 17.5 // 00.4+ // Casualty +1
21 // 17733 // 032 // 02.3 // 05.6- // arianna1 -1
22 // 15201 // 202 // 14.4 // 05.0+ // hongkongexpress
23 // 12909 // 257 // 18.4 // 02.8+ // Sterockicy
24 // 11893 // 674 // 48.1 // 06.0- // Shanus
25 // 10286 // 184 // 13.1 // 01.2- // ever-vigilant
26 // 10283 // 564 // 40.3 // 35.0- // Azentiger
27 // 09809 // 217 // 15.5 // 10.1+ // Cool-Points
28 // 08535 // 360 // 25.7 // 27.3- // K-fox +1
29 // 08418 // 219 // 15.6 // 15.6+ // DarkSoldier 0
30 // 08350 // 071 // 05.1 // 03.2+ // Dela -1
31 // 07509 // 377 // 26.9 // 08.3- // Odyssic
32 // 07031 // 186 // 13.3 // 02.7- // KungFuCow
33 // 05646 // 265 // 18.9 // 03.8+ // DarkLotusJuggalo
34 // 04500 // 243 // 17.4 // 06.3+ // RSQViper
35 // 03917 // 000 // 00.0 // 00.0+ // Snerd
36 // 03864 // 000 // 00.0 // 00.0+ // Solidone
37 // 03790 // 220 // 15.7 // 07.1- // Akatsuki321
38 // 03448 // 638 // 45.6 // 39.8+ // I-Love-Caitlyn +1
39 // 03289 // 053 // 03.8 // 00.9+ // ElementalSoldier -1
40 // 03088 // 302 // 21.6 // 21.6+ // NickScott
41 // 02795 // 265 // 18.9 // 18.9+ // SilentSoldier
42 // 02598 // NEW // NEW // NEW // DaRk
43 // 02508 // 060 // 04.3 // 01.9+ // Dante-Son-Of-Sparda

Ok, I would like to know.... why am I not on the list?

Cause I have been in the Elite Guard Barrack for a while now... and I think its just unfair that you guys dont add me to the list...

Seriously didnt anybody realise I have been posting here for a while?

I would like it if you guys could possibly add me and send the list again... or maybe just add me for the next time...

cause that is seriously disapointing for me...

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 03:16:13


At 7/24/07 03:06 AM, HeavenDuff wrote: Ok, I would like to know.... why am I not on the list?

Cause I have been in the Elite Guard Barrack for a while now... and I think its just unfair that you guys don't add me to the list...

Seriously didn't anybody realize I have been posting here for a while?

I would like it if you guys could possibly add me and send the list again... or maybe just add me for the next time...

cause that is seriously disappointing for me...

Seriously, it's most likely just an oversight and not really worth getting into a tizzy over. Best way for people to handle this is just say something and not sound like they are seriously offended or disappointed.

It isn't "unfair", it's a human error and it happens.

Remember, the folks that do this update give up their free time (we're talking hours) on it and it's easy to overlook someone by accident. Just be more... cool about it next time.

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 03:25:43


At 7/24/07 03:16 AM, RSQViper wrote:
At 7/24/07 03:06 AM, HeavenDuff wrote: Ok, I would like to know.... why am I not on the list?

Cause I have been in the Elite Guard Barrack for a while now... and I think its just unfair that you guys don't add me to the list...

Seriously didn't anybody realize I have been posting here for a while?

I would like it if you guys could possibly add me and send the list again... or maybe just add me for the next time...

cause that is seriously disappointing for me...
Seriously, it's most likely just an oversight and not really worth getting into a tizzy over. Best way for people to handle this is just say something and not sound like they are seriously offended or disappointed.

Ok, sorry

It isn't "unfair", it's a human error and it happens.

Remember, the folks that do this update give up their free time (we're talking hours) on it and it's easy to overlook someone by accident. Just be more... cool about it next time.

I didn't said it right, sorry about that two, I know these guys are working hard and I thanks them, but please just try not to forget about me next time.

I'm sorry if I didn't said it right, seriously.

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 06:48:16


At 7/24/07 03:25 AM, HeavenDuff wrote: Ok, sorry

Hey, don't sweat it, it's not like you just got lectured or disciplined. Hopefully next update you won't get forgotten about though. I also noticed that you're a Police Liutennant now, shouldn't you just go back to the PD? (no offense just saying) It takes a long time to get back to private even from Police Captain.


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 09:04:10


At 7/24/07 03:25 AM, HeavenDuff wrote:
I didn't said it right, sorry about that two, I know these guys are working hard and I thanks them, but please just try not to forget about me next time.

Sorry. I thought I added you to the update last fortnight. I forgot.

I'm sorry if I didn't said it right, seriously.

Thats ok, I can understand that you would have been annoyed. Human error is to blame!

Thanks Andrea for answering things for me! and Shanus of coarse.


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 09:16:01


At 7/21/07 11:56 AM, RSQViper wrote: This is from Adam Phillip's Blog:
"I added a few extra scenes to part B (hence the little incomplete bit on the graph) and I imagine I'll be tweaking and adding bits to part C as I go. For this reason, the July 22 deadline is looking unlikely. Before you kill me though, just think.. if you kill me it'll never get done! Besides, you can't kill me.. I have a mouth to feed!"

Aaw, that means it's not here yet :(

At 7/21/07 03:31 PM, EagleRock wrote:
At 7/21/07 03:01 PM, Coop83 wrote:
Commander Coop83 had always been a loner when it came to patrolling the Portal.
What are you trying to say here? Work alone means efficient work for me :P
Well, you mentioned you wanted to be a sniper, and I figured it would fit the part.

Oh, fair enough, I'll allow the poetic license this once :P

At 7/22/07 08:48 PM, EagleRock wrote: The intercom paused. "Why, my friend, that's easy. It's Wade Fulp."

Just for the record, I am actually a clone of Wade ;)

At 7/23/07 03:15 AM, Sterockicy wrote: Rank // Total B/P points // Gain // Gain/day // Gain rise/drop // Name
14 // 29246 // 000 // 00.0 // 00.0+ // Hemlok
15 // 28197 // 313 // 22.4 // 08.9- // MadCow
16 // 28022 // 445 // 31.8 // 07.3- // Coop83

Is that the top 15 I see before me? I'll go and have a closer look!

At 7/23/07 07:42 PM, alanoink wrote: Sir, Corporal Alanoink reporting, sir!

You're a raw recruit. I'd suggest that you go back to the portal and return to us when you've reached Private. You need 2,500 B/P points for this and currently you have 2.

I have no idea where you got Corporal from, either...


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 09:33:41


At 7/24/07 09:16 AM, Coop83 wrote: I have no idea where you got Corporal from, either...

Maybe he saw EagleRock's story and thought this club is about roleplaying. XD


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 10:08:13


At 7/24/07 02:49 AM, Sentio wrote: Another great chapter EagleRock, sir, comment is in the EGB forums as usual (I wonder if ILC has noticed that I have stormed past his post count yet?)

Hehe, thanks. I'll read right now.

At 7/24/07 01:14 AM, SlashFirestorm wrote: Goddamn it, it looks like the blam animation is no more. I just finished off a UJ flash, and all I got was this. :-(

WE ARE NOT AMUSED.
I noticed that the other day- hopefully they are just coming up with new ones, and haven't set them up yet. I'm going to miss the old protect movie though :(.

I can't say I'm amused, either. It's kind of annoying, actually. However, I just chalked it up to the minus-sides of the redesign, like "Elite Guard" missing from the top ranks.

At 7/24/07 03:06 AM, HeavenDuff wrote: Ok, I would like to know.... why am I not on the list?

I wouldn't worry, like Andrea said. It was just an oversight. Being a stat-whore takes tons of time, so a small slip-up is expected. Sterockicy said he'd add you in, so it'll be all good.

Anyway, so the Portal sped up again since last night, so I'm not bothering to update the DEFCON. DEFCON 3 seems to be portraying it just fine.

I'll be posting Chapter 3 tonight, but I have a feeling that Chapter 4 might be delayed, as I haven't even started it yet. Hopefully I'll get it done, though. I know the story has no gun action yet, but I promise it's coming. You'll have at least 15 chapters of boomstick action to suckle on, so you'll be happy soon enough. :-)


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 18:09:18


At 7/24/07 09:16 AM, Coop83 wrote:
At 7/21/07 11:56 AM, RSQViper wrote: This is from Adam Phillip's Blog:
"I added a few extra scenes to part B (hence the little incomplete bit on the graph) and I imagine I'll be tweaking and adding bits to part C as I go. For this reason, the July 22 deadline is looking unlikely. Before you kill me though, just think.. if you kill me it'll never get done! Besides, you can't kill me.. I have a mouth to feed!"
Aaw, that means it's not here yet :(

Yup, not here yet. And with my luck he'll release the same day I do. I always have luck like that. release the same day as Blockhead once and the same day as Legend of Khail. DAMMIT!

As for B/P I got a little, tiny bit done today. Like 5 or 6.

I had to go get my car inspected (Yeah, it's only like 7 months overdue) and those a-holes tried telling me my muffler was aftermarket and it was too loud. Needless to say the muffler was an OPTION from Scion, bought IN THIS STATE and was certainly not too loud. At all. Then one of the guys there basically tried telling me I was a liar and it was aftermarket and I got right in his sorry-ass face because nobody calls me a liar because I just don't lie - FUCK THAT.

Then another dude came over and was like "yeah, this is an option" he revved the engine and said "That's not too loud." Good thing he came, too or there would have been auto repairman goo all over the place because that other guy was about to get jacked up.

ANYWAY... I still couldn't pass inspection because of some check engine light due to my thermostat. That's a warrantee item, though and I'm going in Thursday to get that cleared up with Scion, so that's make me legal. Finally.

I always put that stuff off, I swear.

Oh, and I vacuumed my car out. I just did that too, oh... 20,000 miles or so ago. It was a mess.

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 18:18:42


Great Chapters EagleRock sir!

I think you should publish it and make it a book.

I know i would buy it.


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 19:03:14


At 7/23/07 08:27 PM, EagleRock wrote:
Stuff it won't let me quote, blar blar blar

Sorry, I had no idea about the ranks. I'll be back soon.


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 21:22:52


At 7/24/07 06:09 PM, RSQViper wrote: I had to go get my car inspected (Yeah, it's only like 7 months overdue) and those a-holes tried telling me my muffler was aftermarket and it was too loud. Needless to say the muffler was an OPTION from Scion, bought IN THIS STATE and was certainly not too loud. At all. Then one of the guys there basically tried telling me I was a liar and it was aftermarket and I got right in his sorry-ass face because nobody calls me a liar because I just don't lie - FUCK THAT.

Then another dude came over and was like "yeah, this is an option" he revved the engine and said "That's not too loud." Good thing he came, too or there would have been auto repairman goo all over the place because that other guy was about to get jacked up.

That is so funny.

ANYWAY... I still couldn't pass inspection because of some check engine light due to my thermostat. That's a warrantee item, though and I'm going in Thursday to get that cleared up with Scion, so that's make me legal. Finally.

AFTER ALL THAT!!! That is fucking hilarious.

At 7/24/07 06:18 PM, DarkSoldier wrote: Great Chapters EagleRock sir!

I think you should publish it and make it a book.

I know i would buy it.

Thanks, but I doubt that it would fly. Let's remember that this is about 16 people on one website. Really, it's just my was of saying "thank you" to the Barracks for the good times. Incidentally, Chapter 3 is forthcoming in a little while...


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-24 21:40:34


At 7/24/07 09:22 PM, EagleRock wrote:
ANYWAY... I still couldn't pass inspection because of some check engine light due to my thermostat. That's a warrantee item, though and I'm going in Thursday to get that cleared up with Scion, so that's make me legal. Finally.
AFTER ALL THAT!!! That is fucking hilarious.

Yeah, no kidding. What kinda pisses me of is it's a 2005 and it's here failing inspection. that is some BULLshit.

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I have decided, for sanity's sake, to give up the idea of fitting each chapter into only one post. I'm keeping it under 8K, but I'll be posting it in two parts. Besides, when the matches start, more action will occur, so I might need to break the 8K rule. I'll feel it out. Anyway, here we go:

The Barracks Under Fire

by EagleRock

Chapter 3 - Trials and Trust

Private DaRk was coughing from the bite of bread he took. Everyone shouted in terror and tried to help him. He then spoke, "Oh my GOD! That bread has GARLIC on it!!!"

Everyone stopped. Phantom then slapped him hard in the face and yelled, "You sonofabitch!! What the hell is the matter with you? This is a serious fucking matter. You fucking do that again and I'll have your neck!"

DaRk felt his cheek and looked up at Phantom, seething. He didn't respond.

-----

DaRk always seemed to rub against the higher-ups, even when he was in the Police Department. However, he was learning quickly that the Elite Guard was different than the NGPD, in that they didn't take anything. No one seemed to object to him getting slapped, even EagleRock. He often wondered if this stuff happened in all of the Elite Guard, or just EagleRock's Barrack. Either way, he was stuck here, like it or not.

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"Well," said Phantom, "he's not dead yet. Still, I don't know if I trust this food."

"This might be true," said EagleRock, "but let's face facts. If they want to kill us, they can do it easily, either by food or by some other means. We're fucking trapped! I say we just eat the food. If they poison us, at least it'll get it over with."

Somehow, this made sense, thought Sentio. All of this doubt and fear was starting to unnerve him, but he knew that he had to stay strong. Losing it wasn't an option, as he was an officer. He thought about this as he slowly ate his food and quelled his hunger.

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He was pretty much rushed into his Relation Officer position, due to the lack of EagleRock's presence and Phantom being run ragged. Phantom had passed on his Relations Officer role to Sentio. Since he joined, he was well respected by the Barracks and was a good role model as a commissioned officer. Then, Phantom started disappearing as well. The exodus of the two top leaders of the Barracks left Sentio as the officer in charge, almost unexpectedly. Here he was, a recent transfer to this Barrack, and how he's in charge. No room to falter, no room to fail, no room for weakness.

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The group finished their meal and deposited their used utensils and dishes in a receptacle next to the food line. Nobody complained of pain from the food, indicating no sign of poison yet. Police Captain TheThing deposited his tray into the receptacle as he followed the rest back to the lounge area.

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TheThing was subject to the same pain Andrea364 was during the renovations, his whole life crippled in one shot. He was lucky to have been in EagleRock's Barrack, as most others that were kicked out had backs turned to them by their fellow soldiers. When he was demoted, he didn't go easy. Instead, he fought it. All that fighting did was get him jailed by the Newgrounds Moderation Staff and charged with insubordination. Luckily, it was Sentio, his Relations Officer, who spoke on his behalf and got him cleared. He had no choice but to leave quietly. The only reason he got his job back was due to Peregrinus, his NGPD Laison. It hurt him to know how thin of a line he had walked on, and half expected this situation to occur. He just didn't expect it to happen to anyone else. He couldn't help but blame himself for all that happened to the Barracks.

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The group got themselves down to the lounge and found seating. Before everyone could get comfortable, the intercom beeped again and the speaker crackled.

"Hello, soldiers. Now that you're fed, I think it's time for you to get acquainted with the arenas. We want to make sure that you know them well before the fights begin."

EagleRock stood up from his lounge chair and approached the computers. "Oh? What is this, bringing the fatted calves to slaughter?"

"Absolutely not. Like I said, we're on the level. I've opened up two teleportation pods for you to travel to the most popular map, de_dust. Just to show you we aren't trying to trick you, I am opening up your weapons cache as well. You'll be armed to the teeth. There won't be anyone there. Feel free to investigate."

EagleRock stared ahead with no expression. Slash approached him and whispered in his ear. "Do you think it's a good idea? Or is it a trap?"

EagleRock turned and looked at Slash. "Like I said before, we are at their disposal. They could kill us at any second if they chose. I say we take a look. At most, two of us die."


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"Yeah? Only two of us, huh? You're willing to make that life sacrifice for yourself? You talk about a human life like it's fodder! WHO ARE YOU TO---"

"I AM going. I have no intention of asking anyone to go in there. If someone wants to follow me, so be it. If I die, so be it. DON'T talk to me like I don't know the value of a human life." Slash stared him down, but EagleRock turned away. He headed down towards the corridor to find a weapon. As he walked away, he said, "If anyone else wants to come, I invite you."

Everyone looked at him for a second, hesitant. Finally, someone spoke.

"I'll go," said TheThing. "I'll come with you. If anyone has to die here, I want it to be me."

"Thank you," said EagleRock. "Let's get down there and see what's up." The two then rushed down the corridor, pods on their right. They saw the two that were open, right next to the weapons cache. The cache was a group of lockers, each one assigned to a soldier. They searched for their names among the row and found the two that were theirs. EagleRock opened his and found all of his choice weapons back from when he played Counter-Strike: a Steyr AUG, a Desert Eagle, as well as a knife, grenades, and a Kevlar helmet and armor. TheThing never played Counter-Strike, but the weapons he found in his locker exactly matched his style of blam rifle: a SG-550 sniper rifle, a Desert Eagle, and all the rest. The two grabbed all the guns and ammo they had in their lockers and suited up.

"Okay," said EagleRock to the rest, "we're going in now. Try to keep track of us using the computers. If I don't come back alive, load up with all the weapons you can and be prepared for anything." Slash stared at EagleRock as he glanced back. EagleRock then turned away, not wanted to deal with Slash being pissed off at him. Slash was pissed, but it wasn't for the reason that EagleRock thought.

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SlashFirestorm was one of the brightest new recruits when he joined the Barracks. He was just a Private First Class, but his skills at blamming and protecting were practically unrivaled. Even EagleRock, the "star" of the Barracks, couldn't compete with Slash's speed and determination. He effectively stole EagleRock's thunder away as the young, determined recruit. At the time, EagleRock was just a Sergeant First Class, just far enough for Slash to develop a rivalry to catch up to him by the time they made Supreme Commander. His career through the ranks took him in a wild goose chase after EagleRock, edging in day by day at his rank. At first it was just a game, but it soon became his life.

Day by day he worked overtime for hours on end to protect the Portal, to get ahead. He was even appointed as Recruitment Officer due to him being a great role model. However, his eyes stayed ahead every single day towards his goal. Slash was then promoted General not long after Eagle, which put him in close reach. That was when he burned out.

After Slash's nervous breakdown, he left the Barracks while EagleRock went ahead to Supreme Commander. Slash did all he could to recover from his affliction and his sickness. He eventually was able to do so and wanted EagleRock to congratulate him on making Supreme Commander. But, by the time he did, EagleRock was gone.

EagleRock always seemed to be the better soldier, the better leader, the better person. Slash knew EagleRock was right about this, and that he was doing the right thing. He was risking his life the for the Barracks, and for him. It made him think about how seriously he took his rivalry, and ate away at him.

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EagleRock and TheThing took their place in front of their respective pods. As they stepped into the chamber, they then disappeared with a huge flash of light.

End of Chapter 3


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-25 00:21:15


At 7/24/07 06:18 PM, DarkSoldier wrote: Great Chapters EagleRock sir!

I think you should publish it and make it a book.

I know i would buy it.

I didnt really had much time to read the chapters but still I have had a quick look at it and it seems good.
I hope to see my character in the story soon :)

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Chapter 3 was very well detailed and ended on a perfect note, sort of a cliffhanger one might say. I have a strong sense from that ending placed in this chapter that fighting will start to occur very soon in this story. CAN'T WAIT!!!! :- )


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-25 02:33:05


Heh, Slash is such a compelling (and sexy) and awesome (and modest) character.


Slash's call

was absorbed

by the darkness.

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-25 06:35:00


I like the page number we are on right now.

Anyway, story looks good so far. A somewhat interesting chapter 2, followed by the very interesting chapter 3. The cliffhanger makes how this story may turn out even more interesting.

Also, I'm kind of worried about asking whether or not Phantom is like that in real life.


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Because this space needs to be bigger than it already should be.

Jigen made this sig. madknt downsized it to fit the filesize limit. Go team.

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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-25 08:57:05


At 7/23/07 03:15 AM, Sterockicy wrote: Barracks roster - July 23, 2007

Cool. Thanks.

Top 5 Gainers:

PenguinLink - 969
Seamonky - 876
Sentio - 721
pwroftheseagoat - 711
Shanus - 674

Congrats to those on this list.

Rank // Total B/P points // Gain // Gain/day // Gain rise/drop // Name
28 // 08535 // 360 // 25.7 // 27.3- // K-fox +1

Ouch. I'm down to about half of my gain per day. I guess its because of all this new stuff that I need to get used too. So I really don't have time to B/P now.

I lost my praporshchik rank! All that hard work for nothing...

*Salutes*

*Salutes*

At 7/23/07 10:22 PM, RSQViper wrote: RSQ POLL
Q. What's your favorite song in the audio portal? Please link it.

You have been polled.

Well...Its a tie between ParagonX - Polar 240 and *Darkmoon Rave* [ZeRoBaSs]

Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-25 08:59:00


At 7/23/07 10:04 PM, X-Naut wrote:
Random word: Floccinaucinihilipilification!

Longest non-technical word in the Oxford English dictionary (29 letters)

Counter random word: Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia.

Ah, the fear of long words.

At 7/24/07 09:33 AM, SlashFirestorm wrote:
At 7/24/07 09:16 AM, Coop83 wrote: I have no idea where you got Corporal from, either...
Maybe he saw EagleRock's story and thought this club is about roleplaying. XD

A chance, but ignorance is not defence :P

Read the chapter today, EagleRock. If you're able to hold off, I might just get promoted as part of the epilogue :P


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-25 09:41:55


At 7/25/07 01:05 AM, SilentSoldier wrote: Chapter 3 was very well detailed and ended on a perfect note, sort of a cliffhanger one might say. I have a strong sense from that ending placed in this chapter that fighting will start to occur very soon in this story. CAN'T WAIT!!!! :- )

Great! Chapter 4 is forthcoming. Chapter 5 is almost done, too, as I just need to clean it up. If I keep going at this rate, I might post two chapters a day...

At 7/25/07 06:35 AM, X-Naut wrote: I like the page number we are on right now.

Anyway, story looks good so far. A somewhat interesting chapter 2, followed by the very interesting chapter 3. The cliffhanger makes how this story may turn out even more interesting.

Also, I'm kind of worried about asking whether or not Phantom is like that in real life.

You need to take a look at his older posts. He has calmed down a LOT since then, but he's still got that fire. It would be an injustice to his character to depict him otherwise. I do LOVE the concept of him completely bitch-slapping DaRk after he pulled that stunt, though. Wait till you see him on the battlefield...he's definitely going to be the most interesting character out there. He'll be the one yelling the little quips as he puts lead into his adversaries.

At 7/25/07 02:33 AM, SlashFirestorm wrote: Heh, Slash is such a compelling (and sexy) and awesome (and modest) character.

You would say that, r.tard.

At 7/25/07 08:59 AM, Coop83 wrote: Read the chapter today, EagleRock. If you're able to hold off, I might just get promoted as part of the epilogue :P

You have to wonder how I plan to work in promotions into my story...


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Response to The Elite Guard Barracks 2007-07-25 10:09:31


At 7/23/07 10:22 PM, RSQViper wrote: RSQ POLL
Q. What's your favorite song in the audio portal? Please link it.

You have been polled.

I just realize I never entered this. I like
this song simply because it blew me away when I first heard it. This band sounds just a bit too good to me, and I think they need to be discovered big time.


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