At 11/7/05 06:13 PM, Fragment wrote: 2099: The Royals: The Traitors Will Be Hanged

Best episode so far, even though i wasn't in it :) Yes, lot's of emotions and mysterious people. Keep them coming, beacuse this is entertaining :)

Mmmm Keep it up.

Cmon pending list!

At 11/6/05 04:07 PM, Final_Sam wrote:

At 11/6/05 03:05 PM, Britkid wrote:

At 11/6/05 02:13 PM, Frostbreath wrote:

At 11/6/05 01:53 PM, Final_Sam wrote:

So did I over-read it? Or hasn't my death been talked about?
It's madness!!!

I repeat my question

whoa, weird story, you really have something going here!

At 11/7/05 06:13 PM, Fragment wrote: 2099: The Royals: The Traitors Will Be Hanged

Sending n00bs to their deaths? Me like.

Cool story so far, i can't wait till I'm featured in it.

The latest two parts of the story, good. Nice work again Fragment. I wonder when the next part will be out.

At 11/8/05 01:29 PM, Britkid wrote:

Cmon pending list!

No, I'm tired and drunk.

Sorry Frag, itll be posyted later.

Fuck you then, buddy! Just kidding, you know I <3 you. And Final_Sam, what was your question again?

At 11/8/05 03:10 PM, Fragment wrote:

At 11/8/05 01:29 PM, Britkid wrote:

Cmon pending list!

No, I'm tired and drunk.

Sorry Frag, itll be posyted later.

Fuck you then, buddy! Just kidding, you know I <3 you. And Final_Sam, what was your question again?

Oh yes, urm, how did I die? didn't seem to read it anywhere

At 11/5/05 05:29 PM, Fragment wrote: Frostbreath tied his hands a feet with chains and rope that made his sking burn. Romoleglarin threads, poison. Frostbreath went to his Jet, searched around, and finally found a round scythe. He smirked, and pulled Lost_Sam's pants down.

Lost_Sam: gaaaaaAAAAaaaAAAHHHhhhHHHHh!!!!!NoooOOOO!!

**Author's Note: this scene has been cut due to it's graphic and very painful sequence. Let's just say Lost_Sam wasn't was not having a Father's Day soon.**

Thar' be an answer out thar'.
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(Silly 'No more than 90% of your post in quotes rule....)

At 11/8/05 03:15 PM, DaMainman wrote:

At 11/5/05 05:29 PM, Fragment wrote:

Lost_Sam: gaaaaaAAAAaaaAAAHHHhhhHHHHh!!!!!NoooOOOO!!

**Author's Note: this scene has been cut due to it's graphic and very painful sequence. Let's just say Lost_Sam wasn't was not having a Father's Day soon.**

Thar' be an answer out thar'.
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So, I am lost_sam? since when?

At 11/8/05 03:11 PM, Final_Sam wrote: Oh yes, urm, how did I die? didn't seem to read it anywhere

Oh yes, of course. Yes, you did die, but apparently it was too graphic to write down. Let's just say....you died without a penis.

*Sticker-slaps own head*

Sorry, I was looking for any 'Sam' I could see.

At 11/8/05 03:18 PM, Fragment wrote:

At 11/8/05 03:11 PM, Final_Sam wrote: Oh yes, urm, how did I die? didn't seem to read it anywhere

Oh yes, of course. Yes, you did die, but apparently it was too graphic to write down. Let's just say....you died without a penis.

But, you called me lost_sam,silly

Heh, i was really into that chapter haha, its looking as good as ever, very entertaining on the slow bbs aswell...

~X~

i demand to be in soon!

please.......

don't castrate me

like your unique story

At 11/8/05 03:17 PM, Final_Sam wrote:

At 11/8/05 03:15 PM, DaMainman wrote:

So, I am lost_sam? since when?

I am so sorry, but your name is just below Lost_Chances and I guess I got confused. Sorry about that, it won't happen again :-(

At 11/8/05 03:28 PM, Fragment wrote:

At 11/8/05 03:17 PM, Final_Sam wrote:

At 11/8/05 03:15 PM, DaMainman wrote:

So, I am lost_sam? since when?

I am so sorry, but your name is just below Lost_Chances and I guess I got confused. Sorry about that, it won't happen again :-(

I'll forgive you when you bring me back to life!
And if You're lucky you've got my respect ;-)

At 11/8/05 03:30 PM, Final_Sam wrote: I'll forgive you when you bring me back to life!
And if You're lucky you've got my respect ;-)

Nevah!

Just kidding. Yeah, I still have a bit of a storyline for you. In fact, you're like one of the main charactes.

Next part coming out soon....be on the lookout.

At 11/8/05 03:34 PM, Fragment wrote: Next part coming out soon....be on the lookout.

Sounds good...

Seems like you have had abit more time on your hands to do some writings, looking good, and cant wait till the next one :-)

~X~

At 11/8/05 03:34 PM, Fragment wrote:

At 11/8/05 03:30 PM, Final_Sam wrote:

Just kidding. Yeah, I still have a bit of a storyline for you. In fact, you're like one of the main charactes.

Next part coming out soon....be on the lookout.

Thanks alot good sir!!
By the way, you're a master in writing!!

At 11/8/05 03:55 PM, Final_Sam wrote: Thanks alot good sir!!
By the way, you're a master in writing!!

Why, thank you!

2099: The Rebels: Traitor to The Cause

Before all of the main story happened, it is time for you to know how it all started anyways.....

Lost_Chances: We got him, sir.

Wylo: Good, good. Just leave him there.

Chocloman and Lost_Chances dropped the bag containing Final_Sam inside. Final_Sam peeked his head out of an opening and glared at Wylo. He then spoke.

Final_Sam: Let me out of here, you madman! For Fulp's sake, I tell you, let me be!

Wylo: Shut the fuck up, Royal! I am now your leader, and you will do as I command

Final_Sam: The only leader I'll ever follow is King -MARINE-, you filthy son of a bitch!

Wylo slapped him. He then walked over to a table that held knives, drills, needles, guns, tongs, and torture devices. Wylo looked over a drill and picked it up. He approached Final_Sam with a look of victory on his face.

Wylo: Hehehe. HAHAHAHAHA!

Final_Sam: No! No! Please, for Fulp's fucking sake, let me go! Nooooo!

Wylo: Shut up, and don't move. Hehehehe

Final_Sam: I'll do anything! I'll kill anyone! I'll defy our King! I'll be a traitor to the cause!

Wylo held Final_Sam's face with one hand. He then turned the drill on, opened Final_Sam's mouth, peered inside.....

Final_Sam: AAaaaAssdshAaaaAAARrrGGgghhh!

Wylo drilled a hole through Final_Sam's molars as Final_Sam lost conciousness....

In the Wastelands...

Lost_Chances: Fulp, Wylo must have killed the guy. He stopped screaming a while ago.

Britkid came running down the sand. His chlothes were burning, and his face and skin was black with dust and ashes. He carried two machine guns, one in each hand.

Britkid: Help me, you fools! There's a battle a couple of miles from here!

Lost_Chances, Chocloman, and Britkid ran, loading and reloading their weapons. Soon they were standing in the middle of a battle raging in between the Royals and Rebels. Bombs lifted dust and smoke into the air, and cracked the desert floor. Planes roared overhead, firing their guns at anything moving. Kids ran for cover, only to be killed by either side. Their mothers lied on the floor, dead because they were trying to protect what little they had. A grenade exploded near the group, sending Britkid through the air.

Lost_Chances and Chocloman: Britkid!

Britkid: I'm fine....arrrgh....I just....fuck! My legs burn!

Lost_Chances and Chocloman dragged Britkid by the arms and propped him up against a crate full of ammo. Britkid nodded in thanks and gave them his machine guns. They ran out.

Lost_Chances: Fuck -MARINE0! Fuck Capitolina! FUCK THE ROYALS!

Chocloman: May you burn in hell!

The couple ran into the Royal lines and fired away. The Royals's bodies ruptured, bled, and exploded. They only stopped the killing to reload. A huge man grabbed them by their collarshirts and pulled them up.

DaMainMan: You motherfuckers! You just killed 20 soldiers, including my assistant!

A small but fearsome looking man approached them and poked the two Rebels with his bayonet, making them bleed if ever so slightly.

Puzzled: Let me kill these motherfuckers, sir!

DaMainMan: Oh, so you aren't dead. You know, I'm starting to regret these two kids didn't kill you.

A bullet ripped through the air, pinning Puzzled in the back. The small man screamed while trying to take his shirt off. Another bullet went through the back of his neck, coming out his mouth. He sprayed Lost_Chances, Chocloman, and DaMainMan, then fell over dead.

StarF68: Couldn't help overhearing your conversation, you know?

The two Rebels broke free of DaMainMan's grip and scrambled towards safety. Chocloman managed to pick up Puzzled's bayonet and cut StarF68 across his cheek. They ran towards the horizon and dissapeared.

DaMainMan: You crazy bitch! You just killed one of our own! I'll report Fragment on this!

StarF68 didn't pay any attention to DaMainMan's ramblings. Instead, he looked towards where the two rebels had scaped.

StarF68: Tonight, innocent women will die, along with two little soldiers playing war....

To be continued......

To gore!
*raises champagne glass*

your story is great!

At 11/9/05 10:59 AM, Fragment wrote: 2099: The Rebels: Traitor to The Cause

Interesting. I like what Wylo did there and the word fuck being used quite a lot, LOL. Nice work again. *waits for next part*

At 11/9/05 11:24 AM, Bahamut7 wrote: Interesting. I like what Wylo did there and the word fuck being used quite a lot, LOL. Nice work again. *waits for next part*

Thank you (and you too, Noob-Antichrist). Shit, I need to add you to the story, I keep putting the same people in and it's getting tiring.

At 11/9/05 11:34 AM, Fragment wrote: Thank you (and you too, Noob-Antichrist). Shit, I need to add you to the story, I keep putting the same people in and it's getting tiring.

LOL, don't worry about me yet. I'll be patient. You don't need to add me yet, but if you do add me very soon, that would be nice.

At 11/9/05 10:59 AM, Fragment wrote: 2099: The Rebels: Traitor to The Cause

This one was rather short, and made little sense. But, i know that's the point with this system. Still, they continue to get better. Good work!

At 11/9/05 10:59 AM, Fragment wrote: 2099: The Rebels: Traitor to The Cause

Whoohoo! I'm a torturer! Good stuff. Is it wrong if I get slightly aroused?

At 11/9/05 11:24 AM, Fucking_Idiot wrote: Interesting. I like what Wylo did there and the word fuck being used quite a lot, LOL. Nice work again. *waits for next part*

I bet you did, Fucking_Idiot.

At 11/9/05 10:59 AM, Fragment wrote: 2099: The Rebels: Traitor to The Cause

Wylo held Final_Sam's face with one hand. He then turned the drill on, opened Final_Sam's mouth, peered inside.....

Final_Sam: AAaaaAssdshAaaaAAARrrGGgghhh!

Wylo drilled a hole through Final_Sam's molars as Final_Sam lost conciousness....

I get hurt a lot!!!