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Bbs Futuristic Story

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-01 17:41:39


At 11/1/05 04:49 PM, StarF68 wrote: Woot! Although I do hope he comes back too, I don't want to steal a cool persons spot. XD

Well, ok, I'll add you. But you're the last person.= to be in, besides the Pending List. And TBF, please read my last posts to find I dropped all the people who I added, except those who I've already talked to and they still want to be in my story. So yeah.


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-01 17:53:15


At 11/1/05 05:51 PM, Britkid wrote:
At 11/1/05 04:35 PM, Fragment wrote:
At 11/1/05 04:28 PM, Sarai wrote:
To the guys: Looks like you're just going to settle with a huge gay orgy, huh?That or I'll make up some girls.
I hope you're joking.

Nope. I'm way serious. If you want sex, then you'll have to settle with gay sex or a chic who doesn't even exist.

But yes, using women as sex objects with out their consent is a little over the line.

That's why I decided to drop it. But I already made contact with most of the girls and everything's fine now.


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 13:49:46


At 11/1/05 05:53 PM, Fragment wrote: Nope. I'm way serious. If you want sex, then you'll have to settle with gay sex or a chic who doesn't even exist.

I think I'd prefer to lose my virginity, hetrosexually, in real life rather than in fiction. Way to point out the uneccesary sex scenes in bad horror movies, you were a little too effective though. Still willing to participate :p

Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 13:52:21


You still never answered about my problem with charecter stealing.


This too will pass.

Memento mori

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 13:53:52


At 11/1/05 04:40 PM, Perfectomundo wrote:
No female NG users will be used for sexual actions without their consent, if any at all.

What?
How about the men?


Failgrounds.

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 13:54:18


Sure, sounds good! Maybe make me some mutated hobo from another dimension.


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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 13:55:26


At 11/2/05 01:52 PM, Lost_Chances wrote: You still never answered about my problem with charecter stealing.

Sometimes, it helps to read carefully:

At 11/1/05 05:41 PM, Fragment wrote: I dropped all the people who I added, except those who I've already talked to and they still want to be in my story.

Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 14:55:44


When can we aspect the first part of the story then?


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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 15:06:23


At 11/2/05 01:55 PM, DaMainman wrote: Sometimes, it helps to read carefully:

At 11/1/05 05:41 PM, Fragment wrote: I dropped all the people who I added, except those who I've already talked to and they still want to be in my story.

Damn, never noticed. Thanks for pointing that out. Fragment, I am guessing it's too late, but if it isn't, is it possible to add me back to the story again?


This too will pass.

Memento mori

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 15:28:46


Ok, people, I'm finally ready to present to you....

2099: Prologue

79 years have passed since the so-called "End of the Word". It came as a surprise that any humans survived The End, and by now our numbers had grown back to over 500,000. People say it was a punishment, seeing as how all other animals and plants survived. But nothing changed. In fact, we could call it as just a mere distraction. Our lives were supported by sin and pure evil. People having sex on the streets, little kids eating the corpses of others.......yes, humanity sure is is a fucking mess-up.

Three men in official looking uniforms walked down a dark and damp hallway. They carried weapons under their silk coats, but the one in front was carrying a plate of sugar cookies, breaking this image of danger and hostility. They stopped in front of tall, wooden doors, the doors looked old but they had an air of royalty. The man in blue silk pulled a card from under his coat and and slid it through the keycard slit. The doors opened with a few beeping sounds and groans. Inside, a dozen of armed men protected a young fellow sitting in a throne. the boy payed no attention to the newcomers and just watched the screen of a raggedy looking IlluminaBox, used to be called TV in the good old days.

"Master King, we have your...cookies." The man in blue said. The two others in red silk approached the King and offered him the cookies. He took it with an expression of disdain, sniffed, and threw the whole plate at the man in blue.

King -MARINE-: I..s-s-said...I want-ted...CHOCOLAIT CHIP COOKAIS!!!

Yes, this was our all-mighty dictator, The Great King -MARINE-. We chose a mildly retarded 20-something to rule over all the land. The man in blue was General XwaynecoltX. His two helpers were known as BazookaNinja and LookingTwiceKills. All of them rolled the eyes at the pathectic display of whininess and overall mental retardation.

XwaynecoltX: Of course, Master King. We will take care of this right away. LookingTwiceKills, BazookaNinja, take away this foul food and bring his Majesty what he wants.

The helpers bowed and left the room, while XwaynecoltX walked over to the throne with a worried look on his face. He turned off the IlluminaBox and made The King look at him.

XwaynecoltX: Sire, there is trouble in the Wastelands again. As you may have noticed, a small army of rebels is forming up there in the North. Yesterday, for example, destroyed the twon of Gan-Durr. We think they may be led by a man simply known as Wylo.

-MARINE-: Did you j-just...said.....Winona?

XwaynecoltX: He is known as Wylo, Sire.

-MARINE-: Huh?

XwaynedoltX sighed and left the room with a bow and a huff of exasperation. the King turned back to the IlluminaBox and made his 12 helpers turn it on- All of them at once.

To be continued.....


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 15:41:46


Good start to the story.

At 11/2/05 03:28 PM, Fragment wrote: -MARINE-: Did you j-just...said.....Winona?

XwaynecoltX: He is known as Wylo, Sire.

Wylina!!!!


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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 15:44:47


At 11/2/05 03:37 PM, Britkid wrote: Good start Fragment, when does the actual story going to be written?

I'm already writing it. you see, I always write a draft before I actually put it out, just to get the feel of it as a whole. That's why the prologue took so long.


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 15:48:35


Sweet, can't wait for the rest


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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 16:07:43


I'm in. Put me on pending or whatever...

Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 16:10:33


At 11/2/05 04:07 PM, CaptinChu wrote: I'm in. Put me on pending or whatever...

Sure, but you're in the Pending List


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 16:16:57


Fragment, you wanted me to post here, so heres my post:

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That is all. I hope you enjoyed my post Fragment. Now stop bending my ear on AIM.


This too will pass.

Memento mori

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 16:36:36


At 11/2/05 04:16 PM, Lost_Chances wrote: Fragment, you wanted me to post here, so heres my post:

Rubber baby buggy bumpers......

Hahahaha, spam >:-( Please don't do that ever again. I'm asking you nicely, please don't.

That is all. I hope you enjoyed my post Fragment. Now stop bending my ear on AIM.

Stop spamming my topics and we'll call it a deal.


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:17:22


At 11/1/05 09:05 AM, Fragment wrote: To make it fair, I'll write a "Pending List", this means that if you came in too late, you can sign up for the Pending List and there may be a chance for you to be in. So, let's start!

Okay, I hope it ain't too late. If not, then I would like to be in it. =)

Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:21:27


At 11/2/05 05:17 PM, Andersson wrote:
At 11/1/05 09:05 AM, Fragment wrote: To make it fair, I'll write a "Pending List", this means that if you came in too late, you can sign up for the Pending List and there may be a chance for you to be in. So, let's start!
Okay, I hope it ain't too late. If not, then I would like to be in it. =)

Sure *adds you*

Besides, I thought it would be too cowardly to not kill people off in the first few chapters, so you may even be in by Chapter 2.


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:23:06


I'd like to be in on this, put me where ever you like.


I am a new terror born in death, a new superstition entering the unassailable fortress of forever. I am legend.

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:25:25


At 11/2/05 05:21 PM, Fragment wrote: Sure *adds you*

Why thank you. =)

Besides, I thought it would be too cowardly to not kill people off in the first few chapters, so you may even be in by Chapter 2.

Aaaaaaaaah! Thank you very much, so I'm gonna be killed now...

*Remembers when I got killed in the Newgrounds Battle Royal Story*

Hehehehe. >=)

Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:31:54


At 11/2/05 05:23 PM, boloneyman wrote: I'd like to be in on this, put me where ever you like.

All right. I guess I'm going to have to make another list to make sure I have everyone in.

List
1. Fragment
2. Frostbreath
3. -Hybr1d-
4. DaMainMan
5. Wylo
6. XwaynecoltX
7. FBIpolux
8. -MARINE-
9. eastsideplaya456
10. Turk
11. Twerpo
12. Noob-Antichrist
13. Lagrance
14. HeartbreakHoldout
15. Mr_Pope
16. LookingTwiceKills
17. Charlie_Murphy
18. Chocloman
19. Britkid
20. BazookaNinja
21. lagatag
22. Lost_Chances
23. Final_Sam
24. NewRetro
25. Bahamut7
26.Sarai

Pending List
1. Cl0wnPuncher
2. phantom16
3. DivineJoic
4. Mast3rmind
5. Zen_Gaijin
6. Puzzled
7. Zen_Zinxe
8. liljim
9. TomFulp
10. WadeFulp
11. KingofNubCakes
12. StarF68
13. Soul_Blade
14. McPaper
15. CaptinChu
16. boloneyman
17. Andersson

Note: Pending List is closed until further notice. All of you in it: congratulate yourselves, you'll be in as soon as possible. Any requests after this point will be ignored, with few, if any, exceptions.


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:34:39


No, no no, Sarai is still not in this :|

Sorry, although your writing style seems fine and I wish you good luck in this, it's not really my thing!

Good luck through.


The Newgrounds O-Ren-Ishii but with a nicer smile and still alive

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:42:46


At 11/2/05 05:34 PM, Sarai wrote: No, no no, Sarai is still not in this :|

sorry, but you really made it seem yesterday as though you wanted to be part of this. It's ok, I guess.

Sorry, although your writing style seems fine and I wish you good luck in this, it's not really my thing!

Thank you. Although you don't want to be in it, I still liked the compliment.

Good luck through.

Thank you again. And next time, make it clear that you're not in! *shakes fist* <3

Bye


HEY MY NAME IS FRAGMENT, AND I GO TO THE POTTY ALLL BY MYSEEEELFFF

Don't talk back.<3

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:44:56


At 11/2/05 05:31 PM, Fragment wrote:
Note: Pending List is closed until further notice. All of you in it: congratulate yourselves, you'll be in as soon as possible. Any requests after this point will be ignored, with few, if any, exceptions.

Thanks for adding me, I'm relieved I was able to slide in at the last moment.


I am a new terror born in death, a new superstition entering the unassailable fortress of forever. I am legend.

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-02 17:50:13


At 11/2/05 05:48 PM, Sanjay wrote: I'll be dead in 2099.

Dont get my hopes up! >:(

<3

Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-03 12:11:10


At 11/2/05 03:28 PM, Fragment wrote: 2099: Prologue

Nice intro to your story Fragment. :) Can't wait to see what happens on the next part.

Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-03 12:33:04


Lookingtwicekills and Bahamut7, please don't post next to eachover, its weird.

and good start Fragment!

please put me in early! and don't kill me....

THANKSYS!!


I hardly ever come here anymore....

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Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-03 15:03:26


At 11/3/05 12:33 PM, Noob-Antichrist wrote: Lookingtwicekills and Bahamut7, please don't post next to eachover, its weird.

Ah, this is one person we could scare by having all the Wade sig copiers post here...

In fact, that's how he dies in the story. By confusion.

Response to Bbs Futuristic Story 2005-11-03 21:10:20


Yay! I'm in! ^.^

E-nail me if you need me, 'cause I'm probably not going to even look at this thread again.

P.S. I will make any music you need, if you'd like. Just e-mail me and tell me what you need and what style.