At 10/22/05 04:21 PM, Etch-A-SketchClock wrote: i will if you make it a flash.
Me too.
Bbs Battle Royale Story
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At 11/8/05 12:32 AM, Mast3rMind wrote: I finally finished this story. It was fun on my behalf, it was the biggest challenge I had ever taken on. 42 chapters will probably be a first and last for me. The best is yet to come though for all those who were involved with the story.
Excellent story Mast3rmind! Does this mean that there might be a short sequal later on? I'd love to see that one. I was hoping to satrt my own Battle Royal Story, but it won;t have near the depth of this one, so I;m not totally sure it will catch. After all, since this one started there have already been about 4 clone versions of it. Anyway, great job Mast3rmind...you are a very skilled story writer.
I can't believe I survived with nothing but a taser.....and some friends.
The way you told this story painted such a perfect image that it should be made into a flash.
Im glad that a noticable number made it out (including me, joy). And now the whole, NG world takeover was a little creepy...but a good setup.
Congrats to you MasterMind on such an amazing story.
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Nice story Mast3rMind.
So whats in store for your next story...and the people who survived?
hey nath, C_M here, sarai will start the topic later on today and we'll help along with the voice acting and photo's and ill notify the artists.
we wont say or do anything until you give us the all clear.
Nice story by the way, im sure this will be the longest of your stories, but not the last, haha.
talk later man peace out
C_M
Thanks to Life-Stream for the sig.
The meeting of the Gods & Goddesses, were YOU at the London meet 2009?
Amazing. I'll comment more tomorrow :)
Well done MM
At 11/7/05 11:29 PM, Mast3rMind wrote: BBS Battle Royale Final Chapter "The Aftermath"
Pulitzer worthy work there man, though the ending wouldn't have been as good for me if "Living on a Prayer" wasn't just happend to play in the backround. Great story nonehteless, glad to be a part of it.
Oh, and Lost_Chances, the ? who killed Sanjay was me, outside the Warehouse, with the Rocket Launcher.
ZOMG CLUE.
Just read 'The Hero with a Thousand Faces' by Joe Campbell. Now I need a new book. PM me suggestions!
Aaak
Thats the end, aww nice in good fasion, and it will be one to remember, this story and Frags story are truly something for the bbs, i enjoyed the chapters from chapters, anyways nice work mm...
~X~
Very good stories i'v been readin them for a while, it was hard to catch up to date. Nice endin great concept u get a 10/10 just for havin the patience for writin this.
At 11/8/05 12:32 AM, TheBoneThug wrote: That story was so fucking intense. It keep me on my toes troughout this story. Fucking rights I survived and killed a man, put a gun againest his head, pulled my trigger now he's dead. This is your best story ever.
Thanks, for the first time ever I was burnt out trying to right something. But hell, I wrote 42 chapters without giving up, this is the longest story I've ever written. Glad to see that some people have liked it.
At 11/8/05 02:06 AM, Mustache_Man wrote: That story throttled my life ..... every chapter i was on edge..
you have serious talent.
So do the other writers, good luck to them when it comes to finishing up their stories and keeping it interesting.
At 11/8/05 02:17 AM, Fragment wrote: Amazing end, it was really heartfelt. I love it. I don't know if I got thi right, but by the hints you gave, there may be another Battle Royale?
There will be one of these days, but I want to see about getting the flash started and done. I'll be apart of it, taking care of a few things, especially voice acting when I get the chance
Great. Count me in, then. And please let some of the same people back, it wouldn't be the same without that great resistance group.
I should let people in on something right now, in order to be in the second one if you had already been killed is if you change your username.
You have created a masterpiece, my friend, that hopefully will never be forgotten. Good bye.
Eventually this will be forgotten, it's inevitable, but for the people involved, I'm heavily sure that they'll keep it in mind to a certain extent.
At 11/8/05 08:08 AM, -Mitsubishi- wrote:I can't believe I survived with nothing but a taser.....and some friends.
The story won't end there, I'll pick up where I left off when I feel like this story craze has died down to make another series. Thanks for liking the story.
At 11/8/05 10:02 AM, Minion777 wrote: The way you told this story painted such a perfect image that it should be made into a flash.
Thanks, and it will be made into a flash. I got help this time.
Im glad that a noticable number made it out (including me, joy). And now the whole, NG world takeover was a little creepy...but a good setup.
It's only the beginning...
Congrats to you MasterMind on such an amazing story.
Thank you
At 11/8/05 10:33 AM, Miss_N wrote: So whats in store for your next story...and the people who survived?
I want you to think about explosions, blood, pain, decept, much like the story I just wrote, but it'll be interesting. All I can say is, it'll be like a gang war.
At 11/8/05 12:26 PM, chaos_mage wrote: Nice story by the way, im sure this will be the longest of your stories, but not the last, haha.
I'm hoping that for a chance to be able to have enough patience to pull something like this off one more time.
At 11/8/05 04:10 PM, Britkid wrote: Wow MM amazing. Even in the Mafia I couldn't tell you had such story writing skill.
Shame I had a crappy death early on, but hey.
I'll see about showing up at the Mafia more when I can.
At 11/8/05 04:13 PM, Sarai wrote: Amazing. I'll comment more tomorrow :)
Please do.
Well done MM
Thank you
At 11/8/05 04:17 PM, JackRabbitStudios wrote: Pulitzer worthy work there man, though the ending wouldn't have been as good for me if "Living on a Prayer" wasn't just happend to play in the backround. Great story nonehteless, glad to be a part of it.
For the people involved, you guys aren't done yet, you'll see what's in store for all of you soon.
At 11/8/05 04:22 PM, XwaynecoltX wrote: Thats the end, aww nice in good fasion, and it will be one to remember, this story and Frags story are truly something for the bbs, i enjoyed the chapters from chapters, anyways nice work mm...
~X~
Thanks, but be prepared for what happens next...
At 11/8/05 04:37 PM, BORIS-4-U wrote: Very good stories i'v been readin them for a while, it was hard to catch up to date. Nice endin great concept u get a 10/10 just for havin the patience for writin this.
Glad to know you enjoyed it.
Still original, creative & innovative, most known unknown.
At 11/8/05 05:05 PM, Mast3rMind wrote: Thanks, but be prepared for what happens next...
Sigh
That sorta scares me, but hey i been dead now for abit haha, anyways ill awat wahat is in store next....
~X~
Wow, the ending was great, really moving. It has been tough to keep up with at times (especially with the time difference- tend to read one chapter before I go to bed and the rest in the morning), but your story has been well worth the effort. I am impressed that you kept it going for so long and never let it get boring. Must have been tempting to just end it all in a huge blood-bath and have done with it. Also like the nice philosophical touches thrown into the mix, was nice to have something to really think about besides blood and guts.
In short, well done, and I will be looking out for both the flash and any future writing efforts.
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Sorry that I couldn't post in here, due to ban, but this was an great story. I can't believe I stood alive. Well, What is the next story gonna be like?
...
Hey man, Sorry about not posting sooner (I got banned). This was a great story. It was way better than I thought it was going to be. I am also surprised that I did not have one of those "Red Shirt" deaths. (Star Trek). Kudos to you. And what is this surprise I read about?
Anyway, the main point of this was... Me and Indian_Wrestler killed XwaynecoltX and M-A-R-C-U-S. YAY! I GOT A KILL! *starts celebrating* I am sad I died.
Famous last words: Fuck you and your cult.
At 11/9/05 04:17 PM, -Rule- wrote: Sorry that I couldn't post in here, due to ban, but this was an great story. I can't believe I stood alive. Well, What is the next story gonna be like?
I'm cleaning up the story right now on my word pad so it can go straight into my forums for safe keeping. So everyone can read it like a book.
At 11/9/05 10:28 PM, Thunder_Joe wrote: And what is this surprise I read about?
I'm having it worked out soon, Sarai will be taking care of it soon enough I think.
Anyway, the main point of this was... Me and Indian_Wrestler killed XwaynecoltX and M-A-R-C-U-S. YAY! I GOT A KILL! *starts celebrating* I am sad I died.
You were an interesting villan, anyways, take your ban count out of your sig, or it'll be deleted. Just a warning, that's all.
Still original, creative & innovative, most known unknown.
I would like to say I loved your story. The ending was truely amazing and when the flashes are relased, I will most likely be putting them into my favourites. I hope you feel proud for making such an amazing story.
This too will pass.
Memento mori
I was banned for a while so I couldn't post my response to my untimely death.
Blown up in my sleep??
I guess i shouldn't have put "too trusting" as my weakness. I should have put "always lets guard down after having sex with gorgeus yet deadly women"
It's a good read tho MM, well done.
"Some kilometers SOUTH of Dublin, under more control of
the IRA, there is a vast farmland. I'm SUPER cereal"
At 11/9/05 10:35 PM, Mast3rMind wrote: You were an interesting villan
Wait. VILLAN!? I just thought of myself as a misguided hero...
take your ban count out of your sig, or it'll be deleted. Just a warning, that's all.
When did that happen? I will remove it just to be on the safe side.
Yo could i join i've read the story read the story so far.
Advanteges: Muffins,insanity,spoons
Disadventages: thinking normally
At 11/10/05 11:02 PM, King_of_potatoes wrote: Yo could i join i've read the story read the story so far.
Advanteges: Muffins,insanity,spoons
Disadventages: thinking normally
ahahahahaha thats a good one!
is he serious?
C_M
Thanks to Life-Stream for the sig.
The meeting of the Gods & Goddesses, were YOU at the London meet 2009?
At 11/11/05 10:34 AM, --chaos-- wrote:At 11/10/05 11:02 PM, King_of_potatoes wrote: Yo could i join i've read the story read the story so far.ahahahahaha thats a good one!
Advanteges: Muffins,insanity,spoons
Disadventages: thinking normally
is he serious?
C_M
Yes,yes i am (>_<)
At 11/11/05 04:52 PM, King_of_potatoes wrote: Yes,yes i am (>_<)
If you havent read.....The story ended....Quite a while ago....
At 11/11/05 04:54 PM, Kaabi wrote:At 11/11/05 04:52 PM, King_of_potatoes wrote: Yes,yes i am (>_<)If you havent read.....The story ended....Quite a while ago....
Sad if you think about it...
This too will pass.
Memento mori
At 12/2/05 02:20 AM, systemovadwn wrote: weakness: strengths
strength: weaknesses
OMFG! This story has been over for almost a month! WHY POST NOW!? Do you read the topics!? Ever?
At 12/2/05 02:20 AM, systemovadwn wrote: weakness: strengths
strength: weaknesses
Ur f****** kidding me, right?
when can the general public expect battle royale 2?
At 12/4/05 09:46 PM, mrFAHRENHEIT wrote: when can the general public expect battle royale 2?
now just sign up
http://www.newground../topic.php?id=397822
