Very interesting bit of poetic writings there. . . . yes, very intriquing. I must say I like that.

Oh, ahem right. me? yes I came here out of the blue. never sleep till dawn, always up. not a stranger to newgrounds just now decided to join up though. ahem yes . . . so . . . good eve to one and all.

At 2/10/05 09:42 PM, MALforPresident wrote:
she also made the mistake of showing her breasts on newgrounds *remembers fondly...*

Ahhh, the good old days.

she's still around though. goes by some weird ass name, and an alt with her real name

Cool, well i hope to run into her sometime.

i think it's the same reason katierings left too.
do you remember katierings?

Yes, i knew of her, i didnt speak much to her though. Seemed a nice enough lady right away.

she has also been writing way more stuff then everybody else. aasha tried a last minute effort, but overall, ramagi has been working more.

Yeah, i think ramagi desereves to add Queen of the LNL, to her ever expansive and growing titles these days :)

Glad to see you Red, i remember you back in the good ol days, you should post alot more here, we need your wit. And yes, i expect your leadership points have been deleted since that escapade you pulled a few months back.

My own home-brewd poetry style with a unique syllable and rhyme scheme. My first attempt at it. I hope you enjoy.

Sins of the Righteous
Remisc Quatrain
By, K. Myst Williams

Crying to one side and left behind you,
The quietly untold shall not be fear;
Nor shall the light be dimmed on untold deeds,
For every drop is a note passed by tear.

Place yourself upon the sea of life anew.
In every light, burning soul, all you do need –
Upon the stand of life or death – is the peace.
Don’t regret; for once again I drop the seed.

Times have changed, I know, it is true – your clue:
All is forgiven; the sins of your last.
I swear forgiveness is not on delay,
Because you’d still be welcomed to my feast.

That grasp upon your conscious – and you
Shall forever be the serpent of dismay;
For along the way you feel no pain – and me –
I, I take the hurt without a word to say

Those who don’t repent fear not, I repent too.
You can’t disappoint me, you’ll always be free.
No matter how hard I don’t try – for you will
Always be the liver and I the livee.

The sins of the righteous are scarce,
But the way is still led by stairs.
Let not one sing, but heaven’s choir;
For all will clam and all will quiet.

woah. i almost forgot that i was still a leader in here...haha.

well. i dont much caer whether we keep the king queen dealy. i mean, the point system was destroyed, and voting would only lead to more people trying to be too damned ncie to eachother or backstabbing, or whatever.

either way. heh, i guess ramagi or quisty would get the queen. and i donno who would get king.

damn late night here. 2.52 am. where in this wolrd is it dark as here?

At 2/11/05 01:13 AM, Quisty wrote: Anyway, great poems everyone. I think ramagi should be queen, and Myst (sp?) should be king.

Thanks. You meant me right? I am concious now, because there are two Mysts on NG. : P

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Anyway, i was reading back and i couldnt figure out what the Queen and King do/are for? Can someone fill me in as to what this is all about please. Thanks. ^_^

P.S. My 100 Lined Personal Prayer will be posted tomorrow. I am too lazy to type all 100 lines tonight. : P It took me two weeks off and on to write... kind of a new experience for me. I hope it doesnt suck.

its 9:24PM here... I plan on pulling an all nighter, hopefully I will wait like 30 minutes or so, so I can get into the swing of conversations here...

At 2/11/05 09:55 PM, The_Redangleprince wrote:

At 2/11/05 09:26 PM, Jamie_McGuire wrote: its 9:24PM here... I plan on pulling an all nighter, hopefully I will wait like 30 minutes or so, so I can get into the swing of conversations here...

An all nighter eh? Not good for your body unless you've had practice.

yeah man, those can do a number on ya.

of course the sad thing is they dont have much effect on me lately.

and due to some recent personal news (no deaths, dont worry) i'll probably be awake most of tonight

I get to talk to a marine recruiter tomorrow, isn't that grand? My aunt said she was gonna shoot me if I signed anything or agreed to anything. She said, "Better for me to kill you than some sand nigga" I love my aunt, always looking out for me :O

thats cool. i always enjoy talking to those guys, they think they've got me hooked into the military until i just am like "yeah, so i'm a pacifist..."

Yah, it's late, and I am bored. So bored that I opened up photoshop and gave someone back hair on their chest! Yah I'm just that bored right now.
Anyway, I don't plan on doing much except that I have to work in less than an hour.
Have a good night everyone.

Okay, this is my first attempt at something like this. So it is porbably flawed or maybe worse.
Either way, i hope you enjoy at least a piece of it, if not all. ^_^

100-Lined Personal Prayer
Free Verse
By, K. Myst Williams

To those above in strength or numbers,
I make a personal plea;
I ask that you lean patient,
For I am long-winded you will see.
Once upon a dire need –
Or simple pleasure in curiosity –
What is, and what was, was created;
Clean soul-ed, but blind, yet, in harmony.
Forgive me, for I have sinned;
As has my companions in life, spirit and kin.
I wish – nay – pray that the worst of life was not upon being free,
Though, that is only the beginning of what I, your servant, kneels upon thee.

Keep up! For my tongue is quick, I must say –
This prayer is as important to me, as to you; you’ll see.
For every happy there is equal hurt.
Sadly, the latter, is where the heart lies last;
It, too, takes granted is comfort,
But don’t feel bad; at times, it lies in the past;
As has all life which you have cast.
The worst of it has yet to come, I know.
However, it can only be greater, if we don’t bargain – somehow –
We must change, we must conquer;
What love is, and what is not.
Whilst life continues; and I, in the spiral, am caught.

Fear not! I have more then plea,
But leave and fall, not autumn, you see.
I swell and think of those with hurt
And seek but just, but all equalities.
Be free, give will, you say;
I say you’re dolt.
For non suffice that greater good;
And none can display, or even would.
I grasp that you are certain
And stick confident to what is yours,
Maybe even not personal, but pride;
I only ask that we continue and grasp what is yours as compromise.

Think large, think long;
For what I have is a barren too strong.
If I could, I would
Be that soul to sacrifice love for hate,
But you – as stubborn as you are –
Seem to like to puppeteer one’s fate.
Hence I contradict myself once more;
Yet another flaw of faith;
Thus, I spin in the game of hate
As a pawn in one’s forever chess-game-case.

The basis is idol;
The purpose is free;
The language is foreign;
The bargain is tea – and crumpets galore,
For we shall talk until the end is no more.
The top of the floors of the building so high
One sits observing, yet, only with a sigh
As one defies – the basis, the purpose, the language
And the bargain; that so soon has yet to fail;
With each detail, but another fall and rushing, not water, but sail.
To the everlasting utopia that is such a far reach away;
We stay, we pray; guess what: we’re in dismay.
As for end: it’s tall, it’s bark, and not canine you see
But nature, not mother, is as bold as that tree.
The furthest, that mountain, that 20-size key –
Again make at home; take the tea, it’s truly free –
I’m sure with the time you’ve discouraged my tame
Agnostic, religious, it’s all but the same.
This could be considered a conversion, I know,
But don’t get an ego as white as the snow.
For the purpose is everything but outright –
But to be and to go – but to broaden my sights.

Hark! The time so dear is nigh;
I ask that you sustain your tears and not cry.
For though most don’t reach upon your love;
Even I, I swear, recognize that there must be some.
Answer; some call; however, we all see the end;
Humanity is scarred, now injured and not willing to mend.
Stop fooling with our eyes, thoughts and emotions;
Delirious minds are oblivious to your notions,
But dedicated to your claimed words
That is too kind to enlighten of the disturbed.
Think of the hurt; think of the disease;
Know where you’re wrong; know what you’re unwilling to seize.
Change; to wrong; however, if there is a good,
There must be a bad;
Are you sure you want to be that man?
Or a symbol, or spirit – but have a soul to make a stand!

You made life with what you said;
Now all that I ask is - for us - you defend.
Children starve and die
Due to will you gave their predecessors.
Now they pray, but nothing; so cry.
Now of life they are suck with the lesser
Forever and ever it seems.
Your long-term goal would seem unfair,
Because the balance of history doesn’t entail
What is fair or the horrific details.

I will begin to conclude my plea;
This obviously neglects the free –
Unless you can find it in me,
Or another, to carry out your personal deeds –
Does good always triumph? It seems hard to believe,
But then again maybe we all have been deceived.

I see that I missed out on a whole lot of poetry and conversation while I was on my brief vacation which is going to commence again right after this post. I feel so bad that I was not here to read all of it. Can someone fill me in on what happened in the rest of Quisty's story, I never did get to read up on who the killer was. Very saddening.

At 2/12/05 03:37 PM, Quisty wrote: I am still working on it...You see, I have writters block...It hurts!

I find that there are two ways - for me - to get rid of writers block.

One: I simple free-write. I pick a topic and write my thoughs until i run out of things to say and that usually gets me flowing by the time i finish.

Two: I listen to Mozart. I am not a huge classical fan, but it seems to clear my mind.

Maybe one of those will help you. ^_^

At 2/12/05 02:04 PM, The_Redangleprince wrote: Thats why I sleep at night :O

lucky you. i'm usually borederline insomniac.

of course the sad thing is they dont have much effect on me lately.

Thats a good thing if you ask me. You don't WANT to feel those effects >_<

not really, it just slowly takes effect till at the end of the week you are dead and drained most every day.

and due to some recent personal news (no deaths, dont worry) i'll probably be awake most of tonight

More MAL late night.....meh, could be worse. Like....godzilla.....and ninjas...ninja godzilla's....

i've always been around late night!

Rofl, That'd be fun to try, and I've got only 53 minutes till I meet the guy...hmmm, we'll see how much money he's willing to shell out for me :O

they dont tend to talk so much after you say soemthing like that, because they figure out you were just fucking with them. and they dont like it. and since they probably can't punch a civilian pacifist for it...they will blow you off

well, i just got home from my speech/drama/acting tourniment dealy.

i got 2nd place!!!

and the other half bid i needed!!

I'M GOING TO THE STATE CHAMPIONSHIPS!

Well I have been training for awhile for all nighters...

I have already finished a pie of pizza, and a lieter of pepsi...

and some other liquids I shouldnt be having!

post on my conditions after finishing Johnny English the movie!

At 2/12/05 10:07 PM, deathtuna wrote: Good luck ont he all ngihter.
Congratulations on 2nd place MAL, I myself have had Ski Tournaments this week, placing 2nd for my team in Giant Slalom, and Falling Terribly on my first slalom run, only to make it up with one of the fastest times my second run, so all in all, a crappy race, because I didnt break top 10.

not too shabby, ski races are always hard to do well in overall. but thats still nice! thanks for the congrats.

Also, I showed a few of my poems to the girl whom all my poems are for, and she wasn't really into it. Which sucks.

ok get this.

my most recent girlfriend broke up with me a few weeks ago because she felt that she "didn't want to date anyone" at the time. and said she still liked me all the same and that.

well. last night she and her ex started dating again. this is the same ex who every time he came up in conversation, she got angry, who made her feel like shit about herself because he used her and took advantage of her and used his nice deeds as leway to get what he wanted. he was the same guy who people pissed her off by saying she and him were perfect for eachother and that she should have never have givin' me a second look.

yeah...

Oh yeah I was kidding, Ive only done an all nighter, when Halo 2 first came out for XBL... we stayed up 2 days straight! :)

So this is my 2nd series attempt...

Feeling the drag... A little!

What should I do to keep me awake more? Any suggestions?

What should I do to keep me awake more? Any suggestions?

I can ban you for the night so you can get some sleep. >:)

Myst WIlliams that was real nice work. I just got home.
I hope to have some stuff for everyone enjoyment later today.

I'm really sorry I kinda disapeared there for a long time. I had to take care of alot of things in my club and then I was distracted by an online game alot too. I'll post the next chapter today probably.
... I know this is a stupid question but what chapter did I leave off on? xD

I had this from the full moon the otehr night forgot to post it.

Moon light

Watching the late night news
When out of the corner of my eye
Came a flicker of light
The moon was so bright

I stepped outside for a better view
I looked at the sky and up at the moon
And there before my eyes
It grew brighter still

And I asked myself--as it grew brighter
I asked myself -- as it grew lighter

What is the moonlight
Mysterious moonlight
What is the moonlight
Beautiful....

That is what it is.

At 2/13/05 12:31 PM, ramagi wrote:
Beautiful....

You said it, very nice. DeathTuna, also nice stuff.

Grats to MAL on the second place, well done man.

Im hungover at the moment, so im just perusing the net trying to keep distracted from the burning pain in my gut and head. And to top it all off, my mini fridge was switched to heating (freeze/off/heat) and now my beers are all nice and fucking warm....argelbalg

At 2/13/05 01:37 AM, ramagi wrote: Myst WIlliams that was real nice work.

Thanks so much!

At 2/13/05 12:31 PM, ramagi wrote: Moon light

I liked yours also. I love how you take something so simple (yet complex : P ), something apart of everday life and turn it into a beautiful piece of art in verse. Alot of your poems, paint a picture, which i love. You have a fine way of brining out the beauty in the most simplistic of things. ^_^

Another great poem!

Hello just checking in how is everyone, thanks onic for depositing for me please continue to do so untill the end of the month thanks ill owe you, just dont miss a deposit or else hehe, so whats everyone up to...

~X~

Quisty read the damn post because i fucking didnt what the fuck man, do you even read what i post...

$#%@#$^%%$^^#%^#$%

Haha...

~X~

Forgod sakes stop with all the drama, anyways congrats on 1000 posts but damn you are slow hehe, anyways whats up people...

~X~

Heh i guess no-one is up talking or anything oh well...

~X~

Here in the late night lounge
Everyone is equal, everyone one is fair
but the beers running out and we only managed to scrougne
enough for 1 jack daniels :'(

Roffl ok that was very short seems like it took maybe 30 seconds heh made me laugh though, and damn deposit once in awhile level 3 is just ummm..... anyways im done...

~X~

At 2/12/05 09:37 PM, MALforPresident wrote: lucky you. i'm usually borederline insomniac.

Better to be borderline than to actually be one like me >: (

Thats a good thing if you ask me. You don't WANT to feel those effects >_<

I never feel the effects anymore, I'm always awake nowadays...but my sleeping patterns are retarded...sometimes ....I'm never asleep, and I'll stay up for days at a time and not be tired, and then sometimes, I'll sleep at like 8pm till 5am, and then wake up and get ready for school and stuff... >_<

well, i just got home from my speech/drama/acting tourniment dealy.

i got 2nd place!!!

and the other half bid i needed!!

I'M GOING TO THE STATE CHAMPIONSHIPS!

Congratz! Hope ya win! :)

Wait

Alone and weary
Feeling the effects life
Tired, but so awake
Need to say goodbye
Goodbye to you
It's over now
You're just a face in a crowd
A crowd of people without fear
I'm only afraid of fear itself
When the time comes to go
I'm ready
No fear
Just emotions
I have nobody, no one to care
I'm sitting here alone
Ripping out my fucking hair
Waiting for the day
When my fate is decided
And until then
I'll wait
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Eh. Nobody's gonna read it anyway

At 2/13/05 11:17 PM, Kirkus wrote:

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Eh. Nobody's gonna read it anyway

I read it, nice, and let me hadle the spammers. :)