At 1/5/05 12:13 AM, MALforPresident wrote:

At 1/5/05 12:05 AM, The_Redangleprince wrote:

that just reminded me of the song "imagine" a complete circle did a remake of it in a creepy way.

You mean "A Perfect Circle?" Heh, never heard them referred to as a "complete" circle, but I guess that works.

I have to say, I like the original John Lennon version much better.

At 1/5/05 12:16 AM, RedCircle wrote:

At 1/5/05 12:13 AM, MALforPresident wrote:

At 1/5/05 12:05 AM, The_Redangleprince wrote:

that just reminded me of the song "imagine" a complete circle did a remake of it in a creepy way.

You mean "A Perfect Circle?" Heh, never heard them referred to as a "complete" circle, but I guess that works.

sorry. i'm running on fumes and dont know what i'm saying anymore. i'm off to bed after this

I have to say, I like the original John Lennon version much better.

as do i. its amazing. but aperfect circle did a pretty good cover to it

At 1/5/05 01:01 AM, Quisty wrote: Congratulations on 300 pages guys.

300 pages is nice. Hope you guys reach for the stars!

Oh, and something bad happened to ~X~ That is why he has not been posting. I feel bad for him, and I might not post much also.

What? I hope nothing too terrible. I hope to hear what happened, but all I can do now is wish him well.

Ramagi - Love the song

Tis wonderful. Thanks ramagi <3

At 1/5/05 01:01 AM, Quisty wrote: Oh, and something bad happened to ~X~ That is why he has not been posting. I feel bad for him, and I might not post much also.

Hrm, I do hope he gets better soon, I was wondering why he wasn't posting. Let's hope for a quick and healthy recovery.

Also another factor when I'm writing stories or poems: I need music. Without music, it becomes impossible. Same for listening. You don't know how hollow my life is without any sound.

Congratulations on page 300, LNLers. Kinda makes me sad that I'm quitting after my series is over. I only have a few more to go. Ah, I do remember that Halloween fondly... Hope you guys enjoy the final stories and I hope the LNL will grow another 300 pages. You all have my blessing.

Sad to hear they are finishing Snerd, they were always short, so i read them all :)

Good song ramagi, very nice indeed.

Sad to hear about X theres always something happening in his life, fuck, i hope he feels better soon.

I'm glad people liked it. Thanks One of my more ambitious things I have done. I need to finish this little porject I am working on.

i'm bored. i'm listening to some music. and i've been reading a Neil Gaiman book. i think i'm going to BS you guys a story. it probably wont ever get a name. sorry.

Walking along a long stretch of desert highway. Bare feet slap and drag across the poorly cared for blacktop. Been walking for hours. With singed sunburned skin and sweat running down his face like a river cutting through an untouched countryside, weaving and meandering and joining untill finally plunging off a cliff into oblivion.

Finally the walking ends and exhaustion takes over into a dreamless deep sleep. Only to wake in the dark hours of the night, under a clear night after the moon had gone down and the warm glow along with it.

Standing now, confused and looking around. Suddenly a bright light hits his eyes and the blinding glare gives way to a shape of a woman.

"wha....who are you? what do you want? where am i?" he utters in a string of almost incoherent rambling.

"shhh, do not speak. just listen" the figure demanded in a kind and understanding soft velvety voice. the voice started up again "you have been chosen. i can not tell you for what, you know in your heart what truly your quest will be. i am only here to tell you that it is time you fallow your heart, that you listen to any others like myself you may meet in your travels. I wont tell you that you are not in danger, because mortal life is always in danger of being taken, much like an apple plucked from a tree. But i tell you this, your journy is no more dangerous then what you do to yourself now. Sleep now, you have much to do in coming hours."

And as quickly as she was there, it was dark again, not a sound, not even a spot in his eyes from the light. He could see as clearly in the dark as before. But now he rested down, as if on a feather bed, and slept very well.

In the morning he awoke with the sun, the sound of distant birds in the distance. The road was still empty of any life, or cars. Walking again, with a skip in his step, he moves quickly and with reason. Unknowing as to what quest she spoke of. Or even to where he was going. He was walking without thinking about it, his feet knew, his heart knew, he was on a journy now, one where he was a passanger till the final moment when it all made sense.

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ok, so i'm just starting it now. tell me what you think.

At 1/5/05 10:59 PM, MALforPresident wrote: i'm bored. i'm listening to some music. and i've been reading a Neil Gaiman book. i think i'm going to BS you guys a story. it probably wont ever get a name. sorry.
ok, so i'm just starting it now. tell me what you think.

That is a decent start. How liong are you going to make it?

At 1/6/05 01:43 PM, The_Redangleprince wrote: Journey to what? Intresting start, hopefully we'll see more of it soon?

i'm trying to use things like hooking plots and that. gets you interested and want to keep reading to find out. i've been toying around with that stuff. and with real time like i am. yeah, maybe i'll add onto it some tonight.

ramagi, i dont know how long it will be. i generally dont write epic long ass stories that go on forever. mine usually last within one or two posts. this one may take a few days to finish, or maybe i'll end it in two or so. i donno.

tee hee, this topic now amlost has as many replies as i have posts!

tee hee, i do things ^_^

Nice story Mal, and i guess your work with hooking plotlines did actually work, because i want the next episode, and i want it NOW!

Also Tuna, i dont know what that penta thingy was, so if you dont mind could you explain. Your poem/sonnet was excellent though, well done.

At 1/6/05 08:42 PM, MALforPresident wrote: tee hee, this topic now amlost has as many replies as i have posts!

tee hee, i do things ^_^

silly spammer you are.

Hellow folks of the late night lounge!

I've been looking through the pages here and it looks like people here are very smart and intelligent so i want to join.... about poems and stories? well im not so good at it but i'll try my best...

My night is not your night, I live in israel... so my night will be your day... but i'll post here when it will be night here... anyway I hope i'll have fun here.... please correct me if im wrong at any point because my english is not so good...

At 1/7/05 08:26 AM, ramagi wrote:

At 1/6/05 08:42 PM, MALforPresident wrote: tee hee, this topic now amlost has as many replies as i have posts!

lol, nice.

tee hee, i do things ^_^

lol, nice.

silly spammer you are.

lol, LIAR!!!
she is a witch, therefore we must burn her :)
lol, MAL for MOD! not mal for spam! GAH!
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SCD - i reviewed your other two flashes, please respond to them :)

iambic pentameter.

you've been reading shakespeare havent j00?
he writes everything in iambic pentameter.
also, who tf was asking about what an iambic pentameter was?
and for what purpose?
EXPLAIN YOURSELF!!!

At 1/8/05 03:54 AM, M-A-R-C-U-S wrote:
EXPLAIN YOURSELF!!!

I asked for it ok, thanks Tuna, that was quite an indepth one aswell :)

Welcome the new Isrealite guy, hope you enjoy yourself here, it is rather fun. Various people that interact though have very little in common except for poetry and stories, songs and ballads, well except for me. Well if im drunk i post stupid poems and stories, but that doesnt count :)

At 1/8/05 10:18 AM, Slightly_Crazy_Dude wrote:

Welcome the new Isrealite guy, hope you enjoy yourself here,

thank you. thank you.

well I dont know if ill find time to sit down and write a poem or a story in my free time because im working on a flash right now...
.....
well I have like 15 seconds lol here ya go:

Sky

The sky, is so big
The sky, a beautiful thing

Hello everyone. How's it going on this fine winters day? I just decided to drop in and make a quick post so you all know that I am still alive. I have been drinking alot of beer latley and enjoying the blizard like conditions outside. That's about it, but I should be around for most of the day, so I will talk to all of yah later.

Hello hello hello

Hi everyone, whats new whats old and whats here??

~X~

So, question. Other then being a place to chat late at night. You guys post alot of lit here too right? What tpye of lit is allowed, anything?
Could i post poetry and short stories and such if i wanted to?
Just checking so i don't piss anyone off.

At 1/8/05 02:28 PM, Onic51346 wrote: Hello everyone. How's it going on this fine winters day? I just decided to drop in and make a quick post so you all know that I am still alive. I have been drinking alot of beer latley and enjoying the blizard like conditions outside. That's about it, but I should be around for most of the day, so I will talk to all of yah later.

lol.... winter.
its summer here!! yesterday was a BEAUTIful day... sunny and 25 degrees (Celcius mind you :P).
hoping to talk to you soon Onic.
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im so bored/tired/hungry/back aching....
and the portal is so damn slow. in nearly an hour there has been 3 submissions... its breakin my BALLS...
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w00t.

It's definitely late at night right now..
i've never posted in here before.
I never knew macrus was from australia
and i'm freezing my ass off over here while he's enjoying the hot sun.
lucky marcus.

A little sad, blame Yoink
Wall

I have been working all day and I want to rest tonight.
So why won’t you hold me and love me.
I don’t know what to do.
You won’t let me through your wall.
So I try to break the wall down.
No matter how hard I try.
The wall never falls down.
I don’t know what to do.
I am lost without you.
I try everything, I can think of.
I never make it through to you.
I don’t know what to do.
So I am stuck on the other side.
With no hope of being with you

so...can i join? OH and whats up ~x~ i dont know if you remember me but you made my sig

At 1/8/05 10:37 PM, YoinK_VineS wrote: It's definitely late at night right now..
i've never posted in here before.
I never knew macrus was from australia
and i'm freezing my ass off over here while he's enjoying the hot sun.
lucky marcus.

lol, you didnt know i was an aussie? weird...
i thought everyone did, lol.
anyhoo, the summers here get too hot for me in late Jan early Feb... thats when school starts, it sucks0rz major p3n0r i tells ya.
but winter here is good.

well, time for some new poetry by malice(I gave away my level 12 account, and this is my old level 9 account)

Die Before I wake

cross my heart
hope i die
i never want
to make you cry
ill jump the bridge
ill hit the ground
goodbye

ill see you someday
while i look to heaven
from hell
i hope you're happy
cause I messed up my life
Made my mistakes
I got my second chance
And already I'm fucking up
I love you so much
But you cannot see
all the pain and despair
that lingers inside of me
I hope I die
before I wake...

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The Same

I hate to talk to her
When it's you I'm thinkin of
the good times that are to come
that's what stickin inside my head
I can't wait until you're back again

I know it feels good
To be with you
But when you're far away
I don't know what to do
All the problems that stem

Where can I go
What can I do
When I feel like no one cares
One day I'll die
and none of my dreams will come true
This corrupted society
We call our world
It's messing up our lives
What will you do to help

The solution is right in front of you
You need to take advantage of the choices in your life
to make things work
to make us work
help me
there's something wrong
I cant figure it out

The same face
The same town
The same life
Everything's the same...

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Fuck You

All around us
Everywhere we go
These stupid ignorant fucks
Try to teach us everything they 'know'
They don't know shit about life
They don't even know themselves
They just try to change us
cause we don't look like them

So fuck you
Fuck what you believe
I don't need to be like you
I'm tired of people
Always thinking they know me
They don't know shit
They don't know who I am
I don't even know who I am

I'm tired of people fucking with me
I've had to fight for my life
Fight for my friends
I fight for what I want
I never get to be calm
I'm always around
In fear
In life
In death
They'll never know me
Until I can figure out who I am....

At 1/8/05 03:54 AM, M-A-R-C-U-S wrote:

iambic pentameter.

you've been reading shakespeare havent j00?

I'm reading Romeo And Juliet for my english class, and my final exam is based on the whole fucking play..and I'm SOO fucking happy that they have the translations into modern english in the sides of the page, otherwise I wouldn't understand shit...I'm just past the part where Romeo kills Tybalt for killing Mercutio...I never thought this book would be good...NEVER!

This was just recently written(bout five minutes ago) after a long week of teachers telling me to be careful what I do if I want to get a good job and telling me how to fucking live.

All I Need Is Me

So you think you know what to do
You dont know shit
I think its time you learned a lesson
About a thing we called life
Don't take it for granted
Don't let it pass you by
Live each day like your last
And stcik up for who you are
Don't change for anyone
No matter what they say to you
If it means you have to fight
For what you believe
Then fight
Fight for your rights

I'd rather be all alone
Then listen to those stupid ignorant fucks
Tell me what they think I should be
My teachers tell me to stay in school
Get a good job
Be a fucking pretty boy
Well fuck you
I know who I am
I know what I wanna be
And I'll never be you

This isn't how I want it to be
I never wanted to be listning
To what you think I should be
Let me take back my life
Cause I don't need you
I don't need anything
In the end
All I need is me.....

Sweet. I love the poem, i might actually submit a few myself.^^