^Eh, wasn't too bad. I'm trying not to be critical since it was your first song. Keep at it, and you'll get the hang of it ;)

Anyways, this is a song I just now made; one of my best imo.

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I made one more and is by far my personal fav out of all the ones I've done.

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This board is probably dead by now but I just made one more composition that I REALLY like. Please rate, if anyone else reads this.

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Wow, this place must really be dead afterall.... Oh, well. I guess I'll do what I can to keep it alive.

Next is probably the heaviest I've ever done. It contains a few riffs from

Nightcrawler -Judas Priest
Breaking the Law -Judas Priest
We Will Rise -Arch Enemy
Paranoid -Black Sabbath
Punk-O-Matic

And a few of my own.

Not nearly as good as the other two, but better than some of my previous work. Also, since you can't really do independent notes shorter than a quarter note, you may not recognize some of the riffs.... if any lol
Arch Enemy's is probably the easiest to hear.

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Best. Name. Ever :P

At 10/27/10 06:38 PM, soraw434 wrote: (I WAS BORED)cF-adf-acF-adf-acF-acG-acF-acG-acF -acG-acF-acG-acG-acG-acG-acG-acG-acG-acG -acG-acF-acF-acF-acF-acF-acF-acF-acF-acF -aab-gab-gab-gdf-gch-gch-waC-gaC-gaC-gaC -Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-G,-zfR-gfR-gfA-gfA-gfA-gfA-gc S-gcS-gfR-gfR-gfA-gfS-gfS-gfR-gfS-gcS-Z-
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Not bad. Pretty simple, but I think that's why I liked it. It had a beat to it and I loved the smooth transitioning. The 12's got annoying after awhile but other than that, I enjoyed it.

8/10 for the overall song
2/10 for effort
10/10 for the title

At 10/29/10 11:34 PM, Kr0w93 wrote:

At 10/27/10 06:38 PM, soraw434 wrote:

Not bad. Pretty simple, but I think that's why I liked it. It had a beat to it and I loved the smooth transitioning. The 12's got annoying after awhile but other than that, I enjoyed it.

8/10 for the overall song
2/10 for effort
10/10 for the title

Thanks!

Well, thanks CULTdotREF.

Kr0w93: The song was pretty good. I liked it, keep it up.

I've got one more song to post, to see if anyone likes it.

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At 11/4/10 11:54 AM, megaflash122 wrote: Well, thanks CULTdotREF.

Kr0w93: The song was pretty good. I liked it, keep it up.

I've got one more song to post, to see if anyone likes it.

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Got another one coming up :)

As for yours;

It was pretty sweet. I love the rhythm you guys can find with the special riffs. I can make some decent work with them, but they're never as catchy as the other pieces of work I've seen posted here. As for this, If there's anything I'd focus on, it'd be the meat and bones of the song and probably a bit more length. You've got the sorta "ting" to your song and I loved it. Reminded me of a mix of old school Sabbath and Slayer. It was just a little short and there wasn't to much of a.... I don't how to put it.... "middle" of the song? I think it's a safe bet you can come up with some serious badass tunes for and intro/outro. Put just a tiny bit more effort into the meat and bones of the song, and I think you're covered ;)

Anyways, here's my other one. Thumbs up if you can recognize the riffs \m/

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Got another in the works but am kinda stuck at a few dead ends.

Any suggestions? Think I should scrap it entirely? Anything?

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Hey, just signed up to newgrounds to post this. Here's my song so far:

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As of now, it doesn't have a title. (I'm not so great with those kind of things) I was hoping to get any advice with a possible ending I could put to this song. I'm up for discussion at this time. 5 am here and ever is asleep. xD Hope you like the song. :)

just a quick question, does anyone use the standard song structure? this is the standard one

intro,verse 1, chorus,verse 2, chorus, bridge, chorus, chorus

it may be tweaked a bit but does anyone stick to that general structure at all?

thanks

darkelmo1

Just to let you know, i am an extremely talented musician. When my mom was pregnant, she went to a concert, i was in a hearing development stage and so music pumped into my brain. i am now really talented and i have perfect pitch. Trust me, if you need help, p.m me.

now to all that want to make a good song here are some tips:
1. keep a good recognizable theme, the harmonies you are provided with don't need to be overused.
2. don't shift minor keys and major keys too much, it just makes a bad song guys
3. not too long
4. if you are having trouble, try the standard structure
5. find notes that make good harmonies together. don't make the whole song 1 note

this is to help others with music making only. thanks for reading, darkelmo1

is this any good?

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Not bad man; I liked it! :)

Here's one I just now made. Haven't messed with POM in awhile, so some of the techniques I used were pretty sketchy in certain parts here and there.

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If it's okay with you guys, I decided to throw in a pic of my band while I'm at it :)

At 1/9/11 04:46 PM, Kr0w93 wrote: If it's okay with you guys, I decided to throw in a pic of my band while I'm at it :)

Had to use 2 images to fit the posting-criteria.

It's not finished, but it's one of my favorites so far.

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Finished Version!

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Don't got that much time, so I really quickly decided to share this.

I didn't forget yours though! I'll review it when I get home :)

At 3/21/11 09:14 AM, MKworld wrote: Punk-O-Matic rocks, but Punk-O-Matic 2 sucks ass!

Not sure what that is supposed to mean, perhaps to incite a flame war, whatever.

Anyway, just finished my newest song. It's called Bang Your Head (Real original I know):

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It's probably just too complicated for him. I just got on after awhile, so sorry it's so late! I'll review the previous guys work and the song I said I would after I restart my lame computer.... lol >_>'

For now, I might as well share this little short song I made.

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At 1/30/11 03:12 PM, BeastSoul wrote: My first song (took me about 2 hours xD) i`d like your opinion thnx (LifeEvolution)df-aag-gam-ccE-acQ-cap-cc S-gdf-aam-ccA-aab-gcz-cab-c!!-caj-cak-cc D-aaj-cak-ccC-acQ-caa-gad-gcz-ccK-caT-gc Z-acz-ccA-ecD-acE-aaj-cak-cal-cam-cao-ca q-ccD-acE-aas-cam-cal-cak-caj-cai-cah-cc S-caq-cdc-adc-adb-adadf-Z-Z-Z-Z-B,ap-gkC -cez-cju-cko-cei-gjM-goA-gkw-coQ-goU-goV -coU-khF-kjy-ckw-ckz-cfm-cfn-gkp-goP-coQ -coR-coS-coT-coU-goV-coO-coN-coM-coL-coK -coJ-coI-ckw-ckvkvkvkv-gkt-Z-Z-Z-Z-B,ak-
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Didn't really recognize any particular theme, but it wasn't bad by any means. The ending was just plain genius. Nice work! I'd give it about a 3.8/5 :)

As for megaflash, It was pretty short but I do like your tastes.

Perhaps maybe a bit more effort into a song with a recognizable theme, "chorus" or sorts, a few manual riffs here and there; just any of that sort and I think you can p with some badass tracks =)

Awesome, thanks Kr0w.

Here's one of my latest work. Probably better than the last one.

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There's nothing I hate more than having a genius idea, but the end product sucks. This is an example of one of those times:

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At 4/11/11 11:40 AM, megaflash122 wrote: Awesome, thanks Kr0w.

Here's one of my latest work. Probably better than the last one.

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I'm glad you didn't think I was too critical with your last one lol In any case, I'll give it a shot.... *loads her up*

Wasn't too bad. I like the theme, but I feel the song itself was a bit slow and the pace just didn't feel quite right with the type of riffs you picked. Furthermore, it felt a bit "hollow". Perhaps including more instrumentals in your main riffs, will help. Once again, there are a lack of manual riffs, which can really help diversify your songs. In any case, I do like how you fit each riff and how well they transition between eachother.

Personally, I think the best advice I can give you, is to experiment a bit; branch out a little :)

Unfortunately, I think I'm still inclined to go with my previous score of 3.8/5

Kr0w, wow, the only thing I didn't like about Night Ravager was the ending. The start was fantastic and the chorus was consistent. But the ending kinda killed it. I give it a 4/5

So, here's something I finished a while ago, but haven't gotten around to posting.

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At 6/3/11 11:39 AM, megaflash122 wrote: Kr0w, wow, the only thing I didn't like about Night Ravager was the ending. The start was fantastic and the chorus was consistent. But the ending kinda killed it. I give it a 4/5

So, here's something I finished a while ago, but haven't gotten around to posting.

I like it but you definitely need more bass. It feels empty. Also, you should try phrasing more. It kind of just sounds like a couple of guys noodling around. Make a definite 4 bar phrase.

I think I am trying to get a CD together somehow. Like 10 or so good songs. I posted 3 up earlier I think so those would be included if you guys wanted to hear those but three more I've written are here:

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I'm thinking about asking some people if I could include their songs in the CD as well... It wouldn't be a profitable thing, just something I can listen to myself and give to a couple of friends for free. If you don't have any objections, I would really love to include some of the work. There are some really awesome songs on here!

To be honest, I kind of stole this idea from megaflash and his piece Largemouth Bass. So sorry! I just listened to it and kinda got a really good idea. I like that song a lot too though, don't get me wrong! Anyway thanks for the idea. So here is FROGGGGGG.

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